Reviews for Bathingsuit Mishaps
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9
This is amazing and just lovely work! You did a great job writing and I hope you continue to do so!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
Watz a masochist?
Satisifiedreader chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
That was one good smut *w*
nshawol566 chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
Heaven chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
Loved It So Much!
bluefairyhunter48 chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
I think this story was really good and entertaining. Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
Come on not common. Unless you were thinking of a different come also spelled cum.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
This was a good fic, btu what the hell is with 'Gods'? are we in Camp half-blood? I think not.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
Omg I absolutely loved this, definitely coming back to read it again. Love the description at the beach, I could totally see the gang behaving that way and what was that, does kid like our maka hey. Lol anyway, loved this PLEASE WRITE MORE :3
Huihui chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
That was dark, but good. I like the innocent neighbor part.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Uhm wow!
That seemed the most true to their personalities of any fanfic I've ever read! You did an amazing job (:
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
it was great like i read it 12 times already
megbacon chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
THT WAS AMAZING! i loved it!
StuckBetweenShades chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Wow. Phew, that was steamy. Jealous Soul was so cute! *w*
And I can totally see Soul as a sadist and Maka as a masochist.
There were some commas missing, but not really a big deal. The flow of the story was okay, though maybe a little messy. Hope you don't feel offended!
Maka Derrick chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Omg this is awsome! My bf Soul Mirabile will love this!
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