|Reviews for Further Surprises|
| Spyke1985 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Ok, you've probably heard this more than once, but Valern is the salarian councilor. Just saying. Sparatus is the original turian councilor. But, that fact aside, this was beyond hot. I read the prelude to this as well, but I have to say this was one of the very best ME threesome encounters I've had the pleasure of reading. Very well visualized, and the pacing was excellent for this type of situation, nice and slow and steamy. Very nice.
| Ketsueki no Kuki chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
For the love of- for SOME reason, people can't seem to understand who the Turian councilor is.
Valern is the SALARIAN councilor. It's on Mass Effect Wiki.
Sparatus is the TURIAN councilor.
These are the councilors from ME1, and, if saved, the following games.
It's not your fault, I'm sure, just wanted to make sure you know.
A wonderful story, though. I love just about every Turian (even Saren, to some extent)
| RedRibbonhood chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
How does this NOT have more reviews? This is probably, no, FOR SURE the hottest threesome out on fanfiction, xenophilic or otherwise. I always love GarrusxShepard but that turian councelor..I always knew that a good lay from Shepard was just what he needed to be put in his place! Lol, just kidding, anyways, great story- the turian cultural and linguistic references made it a lot more than just some sleazy lemon one-shot. Super sexy and well-written.
| zombiegirl22 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
How do you not have more reviews for this fic or your other fics? Really awesome and hot fic. You kept Female shepard, Garrus and Valern in character, and your writing style is well done. As a fan/gamer of the Mass Effect series, I really like this fic and I'm glad you wrote this threesome fic. As a female gamer, and one who has romanced Garrus in both Mass Effect 2 & 3, I must say that this fic feels very close to canon, especially after a mission on the Citadel involving the council (I won't go into more detail in case someone reads the reviews and hasn't finished played mass effect 3, don't want to give away any spoilers). You are quite a talented author and I hope the lack of reviews for this fic and your other fics don't deter you from writing more fics with my new favorite OT3. Like I said you are a talented writer, this was a well written fic, with an interesting, witty/humorous, hot/sexy and very close to canon(honestly I wish that Mass Effect gave female shepards the option of participating in a threesome with Garrus and Valern). Don't know what is coming others from reviewing this masterpiece of a fic, but I honestly wish they do, because you really do deserve awesome reviews for this awesome story. Thank you for sharing this with us!
| adaptation chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
I just read this on Mass Kink, and I fell totally in love with it. It's not often you find threesome fics that don't seem taken straight out of a cheesy porno, and you did an awesome job. This fic is funny and sexy and there's actual character development! This is my new OT3.
| A Foxchild chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
...I feel both happy and dirty at the same time... Plus I don't think this nosebleed is ever going to stop... GOD THAT WAS WONDERFUL!
| Mamba chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
This is one of the best Mass Effect fics I've read... and I've read most of them at this point. I loved the use of Turian culture and language. BioWare should totally add in the tidbits you came up with because they seemed very realistic (for an alien race anyway... you get the point!).
| Vertin chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
I liked the story quite a bit, though all the clicking sounds made me wonder if they were taking speech lessons from the geth.
| Alex.y.111 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Only 3 reviews? What a shame. One of the hottest stories around here, with some great turian sex references. all those sub-vocal talks were hilarious.
| femegade chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Very awesome and hot. I really enjoyed the aspects of turian culture you worked into the story and the way you created this rather enticing situation.
| Frozenheart23 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
*epic nosebleed* that was so hot
| RayneEthelwulf chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Very well done. I need a cigarette though, and I quit smoking over a year ago. Phew, that was hot. *fans face*