Reviews for New Games
Guest chapter 2 . 4/10
I liked it, it was well written!
DropOfFire chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
No, don't be so hard on yourself! You did a really good job!
crazy.yaoi.girl chapter 2 . 5/7/2013
ERMYGOD!
that...
was so...
AWESOME!
you're really good at this! (more games? OuO)
...
please?
pretty please?
pretty please with Oz on top?
...
no? QAQ
okay... QnQ
MadAliceLawliet chapter 2 . 4/14/2013
That was really good. In a really calm way. Because, by God, I can't stop giggling. Can't say much without sounding like a complete alice, but I loved it and am looking forward to your next stories.
Skybarrier101 chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
This was so cute :3
The Insanity Of A Fluffy Bunny chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
Oh my god...that wasw AMAZING!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
I'm reviewing from my phone, something I'm usually too ashamed to do since it makes the reviews short and the grammar nonexistent. Still, I had to review because you seem to be under the impression that you can't write sex. I can't allow that kind of thinking because now I'm eagerly awaiting another sex scene. That was actually pretty fantastic. It wasn't perfect; it was perfect for the story. Tone, actions, words, perfect. My only complaint about the story is that it only works if you accept the premise that Gil secretly likes dominating, and that feels like a stretch, but -if- he did, I'm sure that's exactly how it'd go. Well done.
KilalawakerX3 chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
AMAZING I ABSOLUTELY LOOOVVEEDD THIS TO DEATH!
Reiko chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
I. Loved. This.

It was so adorable. (Though dirty.) It seemed as if this was still all in character and it made sense. I love reading stories about these two characters before Oz fell into the Abyss and for a first timer this was great.
LovelyDemon chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
Little Gil taking control, aww xD
Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
cant believe it was your first time...
amazingly well done
Galileo chapter 2 . 6/25/2012
Good writing! You had it come full circle with good characterization and tons of sexiness XD
Daring Demon chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
Oh my G-d! That was amazing! You have to make them go all the way!
LovelyKitsune chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
This fanfic you made was pure adorable, I just love how you wrote this. Even if this was your first time, your first was epic I love it.. Please keep up the great work, it enjoyable to read. I hope to read more of your stories. -giggles checking your page-
kaira-flowrite chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This was a completely amazing story, Hun. :)) I loved it. The smut was much better than anything I could write. I'm going to make a couple suggestions for your next story, please only take it as some friendly advice from one author to another ok? Don't doubt yourself! If you start believing you can't write it, you won't be able to, and you so can! That was wonderful! :) also, certain places of the story, emotions could be described...oh, what's the word...? Deeper? In greater detail? _' does that make sense...? Either way, it was a lovely story and I hope to read more from you! ~ciao, Kaira
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