Reviews for Private
CherryTheRose chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
w-wait... okay. I never read this. I never saw this... phew, good. hey, whats up?
The Bad Singer chapter 1 . 2/21/2018
This is just an amazing parody I suppose of a creepy pasta.
Alyssa Says Hi chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Taranea chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Ahahahah, brilliant! Utterly bizarre, but brilliant. XD I love fanfics that go all meta ;) (And poor Sonic, he seems to have snapped...) I liked reading it, simple, short, sweet and...surprisingly bloody...drew you in, took you for a tumble and then spat you right out, very fun ride! Shall not be hitting the back button but the "fav" and "add to C2" instead, thanks for the read! ;)
WTF chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
MakeshiftAngel chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Yuli Ban chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Oh... his... god...

Sonic cooking Shadow? That's possibly the most Sonadow thing I've ever heard.

Well, that and Shadic.

Quite the interesting read! Thanks to its gripping summary (reverse psychology always works on humans), I had no choice but to click in (although I checked reviews first to make sure the story actually IS public, as some do write a story for only one person in particular... I don't know why they bother, instead of e-mailing it, and then flaming all who review...bastards.) and I was pleased! Suspenseful, in a humorous way, and I do like suspense, but what I appreciated most is the fact you use the reader him/herself in the story. In a way that doesn't break any guidelines, the reader can enjoy the story from a truly first person point of view.

(You're actually making me want to try my hand at this for the next El Cuento piece)

But no really, Sonic is cooking Shadow? I can only wonder why...
AndromedaAI chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
That's hilarious! Sonic you're cooking Shadow! How could you!
Darth Litarius chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Nice story. I love how you put the reader directly in the story. However, you sort of set yourself up for failure in that you have to dictate how every individual will react. Some would leave the room immediately after Sonic asked. Others (like me) would use their superior size and strength to overpower Sonic in the close-quarters you described and bring down judgement on the murderer in the form of one of those knives you mentioned. And then laugh maniacally.
No Line on the Horizon chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I have no idea what that was, why Sonic was cooking (he can cook!), why Shadow was there, why why why...

BUT... I liked how it was left completely open to the imagination. You provided the base, and we contribute the rest.

But that was funny though XD

Hakimu chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I approached this story with caution, fearing some kind of Sonadow lemon. Thankfully, it wasn't that.

However, this story was equally disturbing, but in a good way. I like how you used second person point of view for this. I almost never see that POV.
Lucy Labrador chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Your short story has had a catalyst effect on the readers. Your story has provoked the darker part of our imaginations.

Why is he cooking him? Will he eat him? What about his facial expressions... If we looked into his eyes would we see a mercury victim, a mad creature expressing his feelings for the other through cannibalism?

These are the questions that sprang into my mind at the end of your story.

I shall take a lesson from this one.
shattered petal chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
I was laughing, until the end. Bloody freaky, UL. Your writing is amazing! What has happened to you? I'm so happy you've gone back into writing (you have, right?). Your work is so original, and you're so good at the horror/humour genre. The second-person narration in this was incredibly effective. Good work!
chaotic-iak chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
...okay, you need Horror as a genre too. Nice, really unusual, but has a loophole. I come from your profile page, not the Sonic archive. :P
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