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brooke13243546 chapter 9 . 9/3/2013
WOW. This was really good! I LOVED how she was a muggle, and she did what every/any muggle would do, ask to see magic. It was anawesome story! LOVED it (I've already said that... Lol) great work!
Rrit chapter 9 . 4/29/2013
Brilliant,
PsychoIdiotLady chapter 9 . 4/28/2013
This was really good! I love the way you interpreted the characters- especially Harry! I always love reading future Harry stories!
teanotes chapter 9 . 10/11/2012
OH MY GOSH.

This is honestly the most amazing James Sirius fic I've ever read, like honestly! You should be really proud of yourself because this story has officially become my headcanon for James Sirius Potter. I especially have a new otp now, James and wow-you-made-an-excellent-character-and-I-don't-even-know-her-name girl!

I think this is awesomely written, and it's soooooo cute. New favorite fic, or what?
TimeToWriteIsHistory chapter 9 . 12/14/2011
This story was so sweet, but I have to say my favorite part was Harry letting James use the motorbike. The fic definitely could have been a lot better if the plot had been clearer and more organized and if you had cut down on the number of tangential conflits, but it was enjoyable, and in the end, that's all that really matters. It was a really low-key fic, and I'm going to give you one of my favorite compliments I've ever received on a piece of my own writing: "It was beautiful in its simplicity." Good job.
Eclectic Me chapter 9 . 11/16/2011
It's a great premise, (I love any kind of story dealing with wizard/muggle relations!), but there were a couple of big issues with it. First, well, I'd think that by the time he's inviting her to dinner, he would be thinking of her as more than, "the girl". Because like it or not, and I mean that for the reader as well as the writer so no offense, but a reader pretty much sees what's written and what the main character is thinking as the same thing, unless there's some obvious reason to the contrary like there's some deception going on. Hope that made sense. You said at the end of the first or second chapter that she was purposely nameless, and by that I thought you meant that you were going to reveal it at the end as some sort of happy surprise, like maybe the name was somehow familiar, or meant something special.

The other thing was that the story ended very abruptly. So much so that they were midconversation. Honestly, it had a more complete feel after the first chapter, although it wouldn't have been as much fun that way. Maybe another chapter or epilogue might be in order? Apart from that though, good story!
faults chapter 9 . 9/30/2011
too cute :D

the first James II fic I've read but this is awesome!
WhatTheDevilIsGoingOn chapter 9 . 9/27/2011
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! :) Please continue with it as it is fantastic and a perfect read.

Please update ASAP.

Thanks xxxx
slimygrimy chapter 9 . 9/1/2011
Oh my! I LOVE IT! I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I simply couldn't, I HAD to read on! This was so, so brilliant, I love you for writing this. And you are very welcome for my 'inspiration', I enjoyed this whole story so much! Small moments that stuck out for me were the conversation between James and Albus, and also the one between James and Teddy, and finally the WHOLE of the last chapter. There are no words really, everything was just so fantastic. All the characters were so loveable, and the moment when the girl ALMOST gave her name was hilarious, purely because you still kept it a secret. I'm really glad we don't know her name, I think it worked best that way. So yes, I will end by saying, I love James, I love the Muggle, I love Harry, Albus, Ginny, Teddy, Fred, Hugo, Lily, basically all of them, and I love you. The end.
lepetiterose chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
the ending was so beautiful, I love how she's so into astronomy and how James is too. And him going on Sirius' motorbike, then Harry getting in trouble and being dragged by his ear? PRICELESS.
Rani Jashalithie chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
I loved it!

So...is her name Leo? Because that would be a spectacular ending.
Z chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
I loved your portrayal of the Potter family. Also, I must say, this was a wonderful story!
AshleyM15 chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
you've officially finisheed...but you didnt tell us her name. Please tell me her name, its gonna eat me otherwise! loved the last chapter, especially the first bit with the motorbikes :)
Jessica682 chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
Sewer that was cute! They are adorable!

Love
Jessica682 chapter 9 . 8/31/2011
Sewer that was cute! They are adorable!

Love
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