Reviews for Athrun's 'Serious' Jokes
falconrukichi chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Kyu! Kyu! Cute!
TheRedSin chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
KYAAAAAAAAH! That was so cute!

GREAT JOB!

xDDDD
autumn's fairy thyme14 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Hey there! Loooove Asucaga fics :) This is quite cute though I think rustling of the leaves or branches is much better than screeching... It got my attention *smile* All in all hope you improve more in your writing and grammar :) MORE POWER TO YOU AND MORE INSPIRATION. Don't get disheartened with flames, take them as compliments, I do.

Love,

Thyme
AnOnMyous chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
tsk , tsk your story plot is nice but your grammar is terrible ... sandy...

they weren't bored with what they were doing either.

- in this sentence, they are grammatical error and misused of tense.

You know, one day when we're all together, I'll bring her with me. You know what she'll call you by then?"

- wrong sentence structure and grammatical error too.

tsk tsk, you still want to go around criticize people English when your English is terrible...

i pity you seriously, if English is your main language then it suck.

i don't mind author who doesn't take English as their first language and write their story as long as they don't go around and boost their English!

you my friend fallen into this category... who care about your English anyway, so what if your English is better than others WHO CARE ABOUT IT!

You may have the support of your friend from your country that English is good but to other like me your standard of English is terrible and your grammar too it suck ...

it not like i am the bad guy here but since you are the want that go around and criticize other ENGLISH!

stop acting cute in your author notes it make me feel like puking when i read your author note ...

it make me wonder if your parent did lecture you or not or do they let you go astray, criticize on other English.

BUT LET ME TELL YOU ONE THING NOT ALL FILIPINO ARE LIKE YOU GOING AROUND AND BOOST THEIR ENGLISH WHEN THEIR ENGLISH ARE KIND OF PRO.

YOU SHOULD DO SOME SOUL-SEARCHING BEFORE YOU CRITICIZES ON OTHER ENGLISH!

AS NOBODY IS PREFECT I UNDERSTAND THAT PEOPLE MAKE MISTAKE!

BUT FOR ME YOUR CASE IS DIFFERENT, YOUR ENGLISH IS WEAK AND YOU DON'T WANT TO ADMIT IT... AND STILL GOING AROUND AND CRITICIZES OTHER GRAMMAR AND ENGLISH! FOR WHAT TO BOOST YOUR POPULARITY AMONG US READERS? LET ME TELL YOU THIS WILL MAKE US HATE YOU EVEN MORE.

THERE ONLY ONE WORD TO DESCRIBE YOUR CHARACTER: CHILDISH GIRL!
123321123 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
I like it little sis! write more in the future :D
chibi'sapphire chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
This is so cute IDE xD
L chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Cute :) Glad Cagalli wants a boy first too.
Esp chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I think i read a quote like this in facebook. _ yep. That was sooo cute btw. . _
Aihsire Atha chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Yeah to short but i like :)
wrathandfury chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Ha, the ending gave me a chuckle.

Please write more :3
IgNighted chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Awe cute! Athrun seems like the type who would want a daughter first.
Drair chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
This story just made me aaaaaawwwwww

Athrun's just too cute when he's teasing Cagalli! _
Pajamaly chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
:) It's cute. Very cute.
Fate Camiswhil chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
that was so short! ...but also very sweet...

I really liked it, hope it was a little bit longer though...

by the way, I would love it too if they had a boy first...XD

all the best of luck and God bless!

(._.)
Reflected Shadows chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
it was cute ) i hope you write more )
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