|Reviews for Unspoken Affection|
| Dixie Darlin chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
well, twas a little disheartening to keep reading only to see that the last sentence was cut off. And the switching from 3rd to 1st person (and also past to present day situations) would've been easier to read if you'd perhaps italicized the stuff that happened in the past in order to break it up. But overall it was a good story, I like the Scrooge/Goldie relationship and it was nice to see one on here while I was just randomly flipping through categories. good job.