|Reviews for Siren Song of the Fallen|
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/17
Aw, poor Ronald. I love the story, it's as good as C&C is and I can't wait till the next chapter. Take all the time you need m'dear, I don't mind waiting the slightest .
Till next time
| mpcarter96 chapter 13 . 2/13
i love this fan fic sooooo much when is the next chapter I've waited forever and there is no update...WHYYY!
| TheDarkCrowSmiles chapter 7 . 12/27/2013
Well it's almost been a year since the last update /3
Sad to see that we'll never see the ending to this ;-; You were a great writer though, happy you were here to write when you could. Though it's sad to see another great writer leave Update if you ever can! We'll always be waiting!
| TheDarkCrowSmiles chapter 13 . 12/11/2013
Everyday that goes by without an update is a mini death for me.
I love this story too much ;-;
Grellplz, deep breaths.
You once went crazy and killed hoes too.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/3/2013
Your stories are amazing. Did you run out of ideas or do you not have anymore time?
| LJB chapter 13 . 10/15/2013
I cant wait for you to write some more! Its the best story ive heard in a VERY long time. You're an amazing writer :)
| emerald-abyss chapter 13 . 10/3/2013
Oh my gosh! I can't wait till the next update! This is amazing, just like the first one is. Follow up whenever as you can, I know it will be great!
| EloquentWriter chapter 13 . 9/28/2013
I really enjoyed this story. You had me hooked from the very beginning. However, one huge problem. NO UPDATE! Please update as soon as possible! You are an amazing writer! :3
| 666 chapter 13 . 9/8/2013
I just finished reading C and C plus this one for the second time... in a week...
Yes I'm pathetic, but your writing is so brilliant I just couldn't resist!
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Hope you feel less schooled out soon! :)
| Al's Deathscythe chapter 13 . 9/3/2013
Thanks for this story. A good story always brightens my day, and yours have brightened several ('cause there's so much good stuff to read that it took me a few days).
I'm lookinig forward to an update.
Don't run yourself ragged by schooling to much. :)
| ChupaQueso chapter 12 . 8/4/2013
Just rereading through this fic again and admiring how beautifully done it is! I eagerly await the next chapter! I have to ask though, since I noticed the color of the horses. Were you going for a four horsemen of the apocalypse vibe or was that coincidental. (With your writing I hardly believe any detail is coincidence!)
| Forgotmyusername chapter 13 . 8/4/2013
I just want to say how utterly ADDICTED I am to both C&C and SsotF haha. Your skills as a writer are absolutely amazing thus far and they are shown beautifully in your pieces. I have to say it, you made me cry when things started going to seemingly end for Ronald and I could visualize and feel each and every detail while Ronald was attempting escape, plotting and finally running for his life. Really! I was in tears and, as a fellow writer and quite the critique, there are no mistakes to be had in both your captivating stories! Seriously, you have kicked ass in C&C with such decriptive power with Resmodus's death and the funeral Ronald created (cried then too ha-ha!) and you're kicking ass with SSotF! Yes, as one of your loyal, eager fans, I seriously want an update and I'll admit, I'm pretty upset about the way Ronald's life has changed and the emptional trauma he's had to suffer, so, naturally, this will be the death of me! I love a good story and to be left wondering what might happen next seriously bugs the hell out of me! But, like I said, as a fellow writer and having people constantly beg for something that you sort have to put your heart and soul into, especially (I swear people know when like gets shitty) when you're in a rough spot and feel like it's not in you, you literally can't due to other things, ect. ect. I just wanna say, you're doing a fantastic job nonetheless, especially with portraying so many different pictures and visuals (gah! It's amazing!) and I appreciate all of the hard work you've done thus far! Really! Thank you so much for the story-the universe that you introduced and caught me in! The ride has been a rollarcoaster for you but you still hold strong and power on through, still writing a world I will forever be enchanted, emotionally tested (ha-ha) and inspired by! Thank you again for working hard for both your life and us crazy, needy fans, ha-ha! I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter and look forward to other works of impressive-ness you may create later on! (By the way, I'm a sucker for Ronilliam hahaha. They're my favorite couple besides EricxAlan!) Keep up the ass kicking in life/story writing! Thank you much once more! :)
I totally forgot my username XD I apologize! Okay. 'nough with my ramblin'! Great job so far though! Quite the ride I have read so far! Punny haha Okay! I'm off! Thanks!
| Lisandria chapter 13 . 7/12/2013
Omg, when i saw that Commands and Caresses was 64 chapters long, i didnt think id end up reading it. But i did, and its the best thing ive ever read. Even better than Hunger Games! And im really loving Siren Song of the Fallen, too! I hope you update soon, ive been dying to see what really happened and how Ronald's all caught in it! P.S. If you ever get either published somehow, im buying a copy!
| Corporalsassyspunchingbag chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I just want to say your stories are amazing! I read them all and they are all really good, I hope to one day be as goof of a writer as you :)
| Corporalsassyspunchingbag chapter 13 . 7/6/2013
Is this where it ends!? :O I read both stories and wanted to know...