Reviews for Brothers in Arms
LarxeneRipOff chapter 18 . 5/26/2015
Does Eraqus suspect Xehanort is visiting Sofia? or is he just trying to reconcile?

Anyway Sofia's character is starting to develop maybe she'll realize Xehanort's true intentions before it is too late?

Anyway Xehanort's discovering something it possible that he's developing feelings for Sofia...NAH!

Seriously when's the next update?
LarxeneRipOff chapter 17 . 5/26/2015
Oh God here we go...Light VS Darkness at last...

Yen Sid uses Water Magic?! thats awesome! but seriously what does he hope to accomplish by using Xehanort as a practice dummy?

Oh and out of curiosity will we see Yen Sid give up his title? and how Master Ixen died?

Eraqus maybe you should listen before you argue your case against Xehanort? just maybe

Im not saying Xehanort is right but he has points..more than you Eraqus

Btw Eraqus im just throwing this out there the reason you defend the worlds is to keep order NOT to combat specific things like Darkness! so no! i dont see that!

Ok im done rambling
LarxeneRipOff chapter 16 . 5/26/2015
Be careful what you wish for Eraqus...damn he is so blind

Yen-Sid brings up valid points...though to be fair at this point in time he hasnt really met Xehanort yet so his knowledge is kinda creepy...are you sure he's only a young man?

oh no...The Keyblade War...and so it begins

Xehanort's gonna become obsessed with the Keyblade War this early? then again..Young Xehanort

Well next chapter!
LarxeneRipOff chapter 15 . 5/26/2015 evil bastard

Sofya...yeah she's an easy target too trusting and naive and quick to give into Xehanort's advances i have a feeling that will be her downfall she's definitely not promiscous at heart though Xehanort's just a massive dick

I recognize those waterfalls from KH2...from that neverending tutorial! Kudos to you for mentioning it!

Some things Xehanort thinks about just plain disturb me...yeah lets move on
LarxeneRipOff chapter 14 . 5/26/2015
Yeah Strategy isn't a strong point of Eraqus's it seems he is way too obsessed with Light attacks and as such his attacks become predictable.

OMG YEN SID! i admit that is not how i imagined him to be like i imagined him to be thousands of years old but it's your opinion so i'll just roll with it

Wow? Already? Time Flies didn't realize the exam would come so soon

so what's gonna happen in the exam? is Xehanort gonna fail?

And to be honest why is Xehanort doing with Sofia? is he jealous of her closeness with Eraqus?

Guess i'll just read on
LarxeneRipOff chapter 13 . 4/18/2015
The plot thickens!

To be honest Eraqus i wouldn't be too shocked that he's been lying to you infact if i were you i would not treat lying to you like something out of the ordinary

so Xehanort's been visiting Sofia? why? he doesn't even like her much if at all!

ah there it is the 'attack first ask questions later' Eraqus has been missing i had hoped it would emerge sooner or later. Makes him more in character

sigh...seeds of distrust planted lets move on
LarxeneRipOff chapter 12 . 4/14/2015
well that's a bit over-the-top all they did was go to another world and yet he thinks that warrants punishment enough to take away the KeyBlade! take away their Armor! for Gods sake not their ability to fight!

no! Eraqus! that's overreaction! maybe Xehanort is getting a little obsessed but you dont take away the KeyBlade!

oh dear god it begins

Xehanort's obsession with Darkness

to be fair he does have a few points as always which is one of the best things about villains-when they are right on occasion.

ah that last line that signifies the beginning of the end of their already?
LarxeneRipOff chapter 11 . 4/14/2015
and Eraqus realizes he was being stupid a bit too late he better go back and apologize to Sofia

and i cant believe im saying this but he needs to apologize to Xehanort! he's not even trying to hide the fact he's jealous and going as far as to pull his KeyBlade on him solely because he's pointing out something Jesus!

what IS in the pouch? are we ever going to find out? and why is Xehanort so determined to keep Eraqus from her

oh dear they are in trouble
LarxeneRipOff chapter 10 . 4/14/2015
...well Eraqus you are terrible with women

seriously no wonder he's single [and probably still a virgin] in BBS he gets irrationally jealous if his crush shows interest in another guy REALLY jealous

ahh to be fair Xehanort has a point about Sofia she is way too excited especially with that little chant

Xehanort's way of pretending to like her but barely tolerating her is very much in character

Eraqus just got friendzoned lets see how he deals with it next chapter
LarxeneRipOff chapter 9 . 4/14/2015
Twilight Town really? i never would have thought of it for a guy that clings to Light so much

so this is why Xehanort wanted to visit Eraqus's the surprise of no one

Sofia seems like a nice girl but my first impression is that she's too excited and naive easy to target
she's in danger and she doesn't even know it

aw crap Eraqus is jealous i can already see where this is going
LarxeneRipOff chapter 8 . 4/14/2015
whats with all this poor Eraqus stuff? frankly this fic shows how bigoted he becomes

Master Ixen seems to be simply spouting out propaganda and the usual 'im right your wrong' crap and Xehanort is the rebellious student [unsurprisingly] and Eraqus is the obedient student.

Xehanort's point this time was a little too over-the-top but his Master shows impatience for anyones ideas that are not his own. so far it's only Xehanort but i think i am right.

sweet KeyBlade Armor!

oh and the opposing views between the two friends come to forefront even though they end up both being wrong Xehanort so far is right Eraqus just parrots what he has been told.

no...Eraqus suggest another world! or not go at all! Xehanort would not go there unless he was after something
LarxeneRipOff chapter 7 . 4/13/2015

ok first of all that last line Xehanort that is sexist. And disgusting. I did not need to know what you think about women for...especially when its that

yeah i can see why Xehanort considers himself a hedonist the vast knowledge of the universe does appear more interesting

oh dear Xehanort is definitely going to do something bad to Sofia Eraqus should have never brought her up now she is marked.

yeah i am certain Eraqus and his old-fashioned courting never got him a woman...unless there is something he'd like to tell Terra

i look forward to where this goes
LarxeneRipOff chapter 6 . 4/13/2015
Does anyone have a tissue i think i might cry after that last line

yeah to be fair if you want to be a friend Eraqus you probably shouldn't regurgitate everything your Master says ok?! you look like a nerd! [..why is he talking like Yoda]

why are you happy Eraqus? one does not simply react with delight when Xehanort can wield a KeyBlade one runs away screaming to warn people

this is not going to end well...
LarxeneRipOff chapter 5 . 4/13/2015
oh my god i just realized what Ixen means thats so clever!

Eraqus is definitely Teachers Pet! constantly parroting his Masters words believing 100% percent his teacher is right and no other opinion is! [that sounds like the Eraqus i know!]

oh yes the Dive To The Heart one of my favorite tutorials ever in a video game

Xehanort acts the way i imagine he would in this situation he has a point with the shield

oh cool Xehanort has a KeyBlade...OH SHIT XEHANORT HAS A KEYBLADE! WE'RE DOOMED!
LarxeneRipOff chapter 4 . 4/13/2015
ah...i see where this is going [its always a girl]

yes Eraqus he is laughing at you

it is really hard to imagine Xehanort generally laughing simply because he's happy for something that is not devious or evil. he strikes me as a really silent one

this Sofia girl better run for the high heavens
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