|Reviews for The Horrible Wonderful Summer in Peru|
| SpencerReid chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
Oh god yes. Nice to see an update after all this time.
And Snape is all kinds of badass, well more then usual, in this. Well done. Loved the chapter.
| Gimlifan8 chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
Your plot is good enough, you know, but you need to get this story beta'd. One of the main problems that annoys the reader off is grammar and lack of punctuation marks.
You have a bit of dialogue and OOC problems, as Harry seems too stupid and Snape's comments are rather inSnapelike. Like the one 'Are you deaf Potter? Get up and get dress, I don't have all day to wait for you.' don't you think it'd be better if the dialogue was 'Have you gone temporarily deaf? Get up and get dressed, for unlike the headmaster I would prefer to start the trip before the season changes.'
Your plot is excellent, though.
| SevSnape's Rickmaniac chapter 6 . 1/8/2012
Keep up the great work
| SevSnape's Rickmaniac chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I know where Daphne Blake is from!
Scooby Doo; watched it every day as a kid
| SpencerReid chapter 5 . 12/1/2011
| SpencerReid chapter 4 . 10/2/2011
I am loving Severus so much right now. You have written him exactly as I imagined him. And I have always imagined him as a man who is great in the wild.
| SpencerReid chapter 3 . 9/1/2011
The female character is from Scooby Doo.
As for the names Michale and Daniel, well I see what you did there.
I suppose that Severus' fake name is Alan? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
| Mego225 chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
Love it! A little on the short side though.. STILL LOVE IT!
| Ramonks33 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Ohhhh...boy,here we are, and intro to a adventure story!