|Reviews for The Wizarding Detective|
| sexy Seren chapter 30 . 10/21
| Riddle Wraith chapter 30 . 10/7
I look forward to your conclusion of this. I've really liked the story so far.
| ralula chapter 30 . 9/16
I like your writing style and the character development, involved, different for each story... Very cool Keep writing your efforts are much appreciated...
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/11
betrayal from ron i understood. the reason was most used by others writers in this site. about hermione's reason, not really acceptable tough. yes, if she thought that she's the best from the golden trio or for the whole her yearmates but wanting a potter fortune? it's not like her and it's strange if you relate it with how she thought that harry was too stupid and let her to do all the research. what's the use for potter fortune then for her if she only wanted to be the best in the school?
yeah i know this is a fanfiction and this story is yours, but i hope maybe you could use another reasonable reason for hermione to betray harry. a poisoned/confuded/imperio hermione by dumbledore and ron will be more acceptable to me
just want to share my thought (so far in 3 chapters),
| Kairan1979 chapter 30 . 9/9
Thanks for the update.
I happen to agree with Hogwarts' 'strong words' about most of the staff. Especially McGonnagal.
| ak chapter 30 . 9/3
moony directeur? amusant! :)
la salle sur demande,ok! mais pourquoi ne pas lui demander d'afficher une carte des maraudeurs sur un mur? ça pourrait être utile pour les conspirateurs!
| Grovtech chapter 30 . 9/4
So nice to see an update. Good to see plans moving forward. Oh the look on Snape's face when Remus becomes headmaster!
| Riddle-Snape chapter 30 . 9/4
oooooooh myyyyy salazar! ... I had to re-read it all bcx I forgot about it... but daaamn Remus? this will be great... actually I was wondering while re-reading why I read it as I don't like pairings at all... well plot is answer... only gread plot can make me read about pairings I dislike... oh that and Kaito KID :D my most beloved character :D ... hope you will update soon ;)
| Scaehime chapter 30 . 9/2
That is awesome! Lupin as headmaster is a great idea. Looking forward to how that affects things in the future.
I have some suggestions to improve your writing: Try to give some kind of "secondary action" in the narrative. You have a little bit, like "The others exchanged looks", lines about characters laughing or shrugging, and one instance of a collective nod, but that's about it.
It's a bit cliche, this piece of advice, but show, don't tell. I would have liked to follow along as Shinichi snooped around the city, not just hear about what happened afterwards, for example. Talking about what happened after the fact, so to speak, can be a useful tool if you're getting writer's block on how to show what happens, but if you use that kind of technique too often, your writing gets less exciting to read.
Take my advice, or not. It's your fic, and I have no control over how you write it, but I hope you at least think about what I said. You have a great story here, and I'm looking forward to more.
| Esmereilda chapter 30 . 9/2
i totally agree lupin was the best DADA teach to grace the halls of hogwarts
| Nytefyre chapter 30 . 9/1
Good to see and update. The choice of the new headmaster was a surprise. I look forward to the next update.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
| buterflypuss chapter 30 . 9/1
| Fallow53 chapter 30 . 8/29
xxx Kudos xxx : )
| 6258489 chapter 17 . 8/30
I'm still not sure I understand their reluctance to obliviate people. it would make certain things much easier
| R. A Cross chapter 30 . 8/30
Thanks for the chapter