Reviews for The Wizarding Detective
Kaito Hatake Uch chapter 27 . 4/17
mmmm

Kaito is hungry wants to eat
Kaito Hatake Uchiha chapter 27 . 4/17
hmmmm

Kaito is hungry wants to eat
Guest chapter 14 . 4/15
The timeline that Dumbles is using in chapter 14 is all wrong his sister died many years before world war 2 not long after he himself graduated from Hogwarts which was in the late part of the 1800's or very early 1900's. Dumbledore had around forty years maybe more to pretend to grieve over his sisters death.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/15
If there are not Veela males then their population is not sustainable unless all Females born are pure Veela. Because if not only the first female of their race would be pure and everyone that follows would be of diluted genetics.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/14
The study and types of magic known and used would be different in Japan. This story has it that all magic was basically derived from England and Europe and it is taught the same world wide.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/13
As readers we already know the story leading up to Harry ending up in Japan in chapter seven. To go through the entire story with Shinichi again in detail is very awkward and really unnecessary. In such situations it would simply be better to inform the reader that Shinichi was given Harry's background story with occasional references to the abuse and betrayals, and how Harry's feels about it. Focus on Harry’s emotions from the retelling of the story, and how the characters respond and support each other. The emphasis is then placed more on the character development and away from rushed and less than satisfying explanations that rehash what has already been covered. I feel that Rowling’s did not do a good job of portraying Harry as a male character. As in some poorly written novels he comes off more as a pathetic overly emotionally weepy female. I would watch for this as such character portrayals are demeaning, and not fare, or accurate regardless of gender.
Autumngold chapter 27 . 4/5
Thank goodness Harry is away from Britain and that some of the wizards there are smart enough to realize they drove him away. Hopefully they won't expect him to stay after he ends the war. Is Sirius safe in Britain? With Voldemort in charge of the ministry, I hope he has a good place to hide. Wonderful update! Can't wait for more!
SeanHicks4 chapter 27 . 4/6
Cool cross, I probably would have liked a few more Weasley's making the cut for redemption, but the stories making up for that so far...
Esmereilda chapter 27 . 4/6
so much for the element of surprise being on the side of the baddies XD
Kairan1979 chapter 27 . 4/6
Thanks for the update.
Freedom and Liberty surely are more effective than Order of Phoenix ever was.
Looking forward how they are planning to counter the invasion of Hogwarts.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 27 . 4/6
Another excellent chapter! Keep up the great work!
Shaunee Altman chapter 27 . 4/6
One problem with this chapter: I can't see VOLDEMORT of all people explaining himself to his Death Eaters.
Thanks for writing!
monstar315 chapter 24 . 4/6
i had thought of a scene where harry steals something from kaito, shocking him and earning his respect but then you announced he was magical. you could still do a scene like that except it would probably be on a friendlier note...:)
monstar315 chapter 15 . 4/5
really, i would have thought it would be an emerald...
Araytigre chapter 27 . 4/5
At least Harry and Shinichi are getting in some good training, and coming up with some interesting Spell Chains to boot. It is fortunate that the Resistance is able to keep tabs on Voldies plans while he is in the Minister's Office, and hopefully, he won't figure it out any time soon. Thank You. TTFN
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