Reviews for Ashes of the Past
Teaisbitter chapter 129 . 3h
The f*** is going on here. Why the grunt are suddenly there.
Teaisbitter chapter 112 . 9/27
This Steve feel like a bs character that came out of nowhere just like that Tobias guy and I hate it.
3tim chapter 9 . 9/26
This might be too much for me.

Super powered up cast, but no life skills. Ash not knowing how to use a compass or navigate made sense when he was younger, but no one on his team knowing after time travel BS seems like it's intentional, so he can follow stations of the plot.

That whole reciting feudal laws thing was cringe AF. I'd have probably been all over that when I was new to reading fanfics.

Might give it another shot later.
3tim chapter 2 . 9/26
He's handing out memory restoration like candy, lol. I'm still at a loss on why for team rocket, hope it's explained later.
Lycoan2109 chapter 37 . 9/18
just Rereading it for fun ... Wrote this review because it just occured to me that the regional variants having different types and the gigantamax and dynamax things are actually concepts OF the OG ANIME ALL ALONG. THOSE POKEMOPOLIS THING AND THIS WEIRD ONIX. if pokemon was a continous series like one piece fans would call it foreshadowing of the tallest order
ethwil20 chapter 305 . 9/11
Just want to say i absolutly love this fic. i have read through it several times at this point. i am curious if you plan on doing the Cynthia battle at some point even though you did one in your other fic. just feels odd with stopping before it. regardless this is still the best fic and one of the best stories i have read so thank you.
Mysteryfan17 chapter 247 . 9/6
I can't help but think, each time Cinder uses Play Rough on someone by swinging them around by a tail like that, I just picture Hulk vs Loki in Avengers and that becomes my image... makes me chuckle every time.
Serpent Moon chapter 51 . 8/31
You should make a side story on what sir aaron and the others do
Vully chapter 305 . 8/26
This , and your other Pokémon story’s are incredibly brilliant, to the point where I have trouble watching Pokemon journeys because the Lucario is wrong
Any other time I have read a Pokemon fanfic ash has just been to out of character for me to enjoy it but your stories are so good that I prefer them to the Pokemon journeys series
Thank you for giving me Pokemon stories I can enjoy
Mysteryfan17 chapter 197 . 8/23
Ash invented the Aura Bomb. That might work very well in the future...
tsougrhs.59 chapter 2 . 8/23
yea is annoying all of them having the memories
nasapeepolover116 chapter 25 . 8/22
erie blue light... Oh No.

welp they are all dead from the radiation of whatever just went critical
nasapeepolover116 chapter 22 . 8/22
it just means that the fact that Brooke knows them that well that it's somewhat worse
nasapeepolover116 chapter 10 . 8/21
it shouldn't bug me and I don't know why everything else is pretty fine but the real live places immediately takes me out of the illusion
nasapeepolover116 chapter 9 . 8/21
I found this again an I now realize why I didn't finish the first ten I didn't like the fact that it seems you just combined our world and much of it's logic and just gave Charizard a nuke button to a freaking ten or so year old kid.

I'm still going to read it since other then that I've loved it so far it was insane logic what was happening completely out there but it was just enough not out there was like that could probably happen maybe. yeah then it ramped up a tie too much and that's why I stopped either way as I said I'm going to continue reading it since I can't find very many actually well written pokémon fanfics that last this long
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