|Reviews for Ashes of the Past|
| Verdauga chapter 98 . 11h
SquirtleLaws of the universe? What are those?
| arsenicminds chapter 1 . 12h
I honeslty can't get over how much I love your writing style; its so blante yet detailed at the same time that it just awes me and I fangirl every time you update because it brings me so much happiness and you might think wow this girl is such a noob but its just that this book, about the pokeworld, is my happy place compared to the shit I have to deal with at "home" so yeah I'm re reading this and I couldn't be happier
| arsenicminds chapter 1 . 12h
this is like my 5th time re reading this I love it so much
| Alder Niis chapter 23 . 17h
So... is Kingler also a mantis shrimp now?
| Verdauga chapter 81 . 2/17
Too damn funny.
| evercocat chapter 9 . 2/15
I don't get the dragon king joke please someone tell me
| R37uy chapter 1 . 2/14
Sorry, the previous review mentioning your "Master, Pokemon" story was from me. A response should be sent to this account.
Sorry, forgot to log in XD
| retuy13yahoo.com chapter 212 . 2/14
I have to admit, I read this story all the way through on at least 4 occasions! It's that good!
Anyways, I was wondering, do you have any ideas of what will come after Ashes of The Past? I honestly don't know how far this story plans to go into the anime, whether it be the end of Sinnoh, or all the way to Alola (and beyond). I, personally, would love to see your story "Master, Pokemon" Book become a full on story, and not justhe tid bits of the story. I really feel that it had a great idea behind it, and I feel you could write it well. Not to mention Altoshipping. I'm a sucker for that ;) Even without becoming a full story, I would love to see it updated again.
A response would be appreciated, but seeing as you have literal thousands of reviews, I understand if that's asking to much.
| Moriko no Hikari chapter 212 . 2/14
Aw, Aron! I remember working with Nambeline in Omega. She was awesome. I'm sure Max is going to have a lot of fun with his!
| RowennaOlympian chapter 212 . 2/12
I started reading this sometime before Christmas...Finally caught up.
| SailorUmbreon chapter 207 . 2/11
now that I have finished chapter 206, I have come to realise that the entire Gym is, in fact, a FairyTail reference. (I would have posted it on chapter 206 but you know how fanfiction is with 'only one review at a time')
I have also come to realise that some of my last review may have been cut off due to character limits and stuff. If so it's okay because there was a spoiler in that part of it anyway.
| SailorUmbreon chapter 206 . 2/11
Finally! I'm on Chapter 206! I'm only half way through but I couldn't resist - The new Gardenia Town Gym Leader Mavis? Who uses Fairy Types? Is that a FairyTail reference?! (plz be a FairyTail reference!)
Oh! And anyone looking for an actual review, this story is the literal BEST that I have ever read, and the summary is right. It isn't entirely serious. But I don't care! And neither should you! It'll make you laugh on more than one occasion and is just amazingly written all through out!
A little warning though. This is one of those stories that makes you smile or laugh so much people begin to think that you're insane if you read it in public, like on a bus or a train or in school. Heck! It's even made me feel slightly more insane than I was 205 and a half chapters ago and I mostly read it at home... in my bedroom... all alone...
Anyway! You have been warned, and this fanfiction has been recommended to anyone and everyone that loves Pokémon and more specifically, anyone who thinks that the anime can be 10x better than it actually is. Especially after (SPOILER ALERT) Team Rocket defeated Ash in a recent episode of Sun and Moon (I mean REALLY!)
| Kung-fu Blaziken chapter 100 . 2/11
JESUS CHRIST MAN!
I've been enjoying the crazy and awesome that this story has to offer so far, but THAT...
Holy Arceus that was utterly INSANE...
AND I LOVED IT!
What a way to celebrate chapter 100!
| MelodyGirl239 chapter 83 . 2/10
Random idea- why not have Ritchie go to Alola, or at least meet someone from there? Alola has psychic type Raichu, and Ritchie has a Raichu that can use psychic moves. Maybe his Raichu would like the idea of using his tail as a hoverboard.
| Pokefan87 chapter 8 . 2/10
I was going back and rereading your earlier chapters, and I just low-key died when I found the Ranma 1/2 reference... Arceus, do I love this story