Reviews for Ashes of the Past
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 12/2
Cute
Dragon scion of urabrask chapter 207 . 11/28
I know this is an older chapter but i love how mespret talks like a salarien.
Horned Reaper 266 chapter 251 . 11/26
Tyrantrum & Primeape: 'Oh wise Snorlax of the clearing, what is your wisdom?'
kiritonickas chapter 9 . 10/29
My drill is the drill that pierces the heeeeaaavens.
Yomugan chapter 293 . 10/25
I think
Yomugan chapter 293 . 10/25
You forgot ser Aarons Lucario
Yomugan chapter 281 . 10/24
Allways love your work. Big fan. If you ever came back to this fic, how would you escalate Unova to handle Ash’s team? Because the only thing I can think of that would challenge Ash would be something Like an Active Unovan Civil war for the entirety of Unova with team Plasma in control a mind controlledOriginal Dragon. However thats both too Dark for Pokemon and Also not enough of a challenge for ash.
N1cok chapter 133 . 10/2
This is probably the third best pokemon fanfiction I've read. But after johto the plot took a huge dive. It's just seems so boring now. Even the humor is getting grating when all it is, is just varying degrees of "Is this normal" or "That just happened."
Then there's the fact that Ash isn't using his strongest pokemon even during life and death situations. And ignoring the other legendaries desire to be included more. Along with the amount effort being put into the pokemon romance than the human romance.
Ash's aura training is just all backround with nothing interesting happening on the front. It's never really shown off and is treated as uninsteresting by everyone he meets now. He doesn't really seem like a Aura user anymore, the aura stuff is somehow very underutilized in every situation he can use it besides regular trainer battles.
Then their's the unexplained ability of his that allows him mega evolve pokemon without a mega stone that was never mentioned again after it happened the second time. Along with squirtles weirdness that allowed him to mega evolve that he gets treated with dismissivness bordering on disdain for, which I assume is supposed to be more low brow humor instead of a plot point.

From this point on I'm gonna be skipping most of every chapter and hope it gets interesting like it used to be.
N1cok chapter 129 . 10/1
Okay. So I guess Ash completely forgot that he can call for more Pokemon through Dexter.
N1cok chapter 124 . 10/1
Why can't Ash just do the gym battles outside? Like before? And don't they have the mega stone radar? Are they just not using it?
N1cok chapter 118 . 10/1
Did Gary and Ash or the author forget about the mawilite?
N1cok chapter 117 . 10/1
The Aura Master clothing... why the hell does his mom not want him to use the life saving equipment? It's lowers his weight so he can fall a much greater height and the hat protects against psychic attacks... What type of Mom doesn't want their kid to be as safe as possible? Does she not know that the clothing has special effects? Or does she not remember how often he runs into life and death situations?
destinyalyssa625 chapter 1 . 9/30
update I'm curious how will be unima (Pokemon ashen the past
destinyalyssa625 chapter 76 . 9/30
update I'm curious how it will be unima
N1cok chapter 85 . 9/29
Why are none of the gyms rated for Pokemon battles?
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