Reviews for The God Particle
Eve Stirwin chapter 10 . 9/20
Two alternate Hypotheses that I feel James would've made: Celestia manipulates the air in a wide radius, making the light 'bend' around the denser air in such a way that the sun 'rises'; or, Celestia rotates the planet, making the sun 'rise' similar to how it does on Earth.
MorgothII chapter 72 . 7/24
Great story so far! Spent the entire day reading it, looking forward to next chapter! :)
leafsoul chapter 72 . 7/21
Amazing story
LightningFlash22 chapter 72 . 7/13
I love this chapter! Also, it would be great if you could upload e new story on fimfiction. I personally like that site better :)

You're doing great on this story! Keep it up! Also, maybe soon you could create a "follow up" story to when the two dimensions line up again. Maybe like when humans can enter the MLP world. I was thinking that because of the thing you said earlier in the story how about 1,000 years later both dimensions would line up... Idk, just suggestions.
SkullCrusher550 chapter 72 . 7/12
This is the most awesome I've ever heard from you, hope you will keep up the good work! :)
k chapter 71 . 6/29
Amazing. Please keep working on this... I have read this whole story in about 2 weeks of binge reading, and would like it if you continue this. You're an amazing writer, and would like to see how this ends.
Soul Spark chapter 71 . 6/25
You have something amazing here. you shouldn't let this work and all of this well thought out effort end. You have got to finish it. leave with a solid and firm mark on this world with this fantastic piece of art. I know you can finish it. you have 400 people waiting for you. we are patient but anxious for the end of the hiatus.
Guest chapter 71 . 5/25
xxXHyperXxx chapter 71 . 5/5
I need MOAR! this story is too gurd!
Dorito-Fingers chapter 71 . 4/6
I have been following this since 2012 and I have to say that you never disappoint. Even after I've stopped watching the show I find this fic to be thoroughly entertaining.

Keep up the awesome work! :)
Grell the Batman chapter 35 . 4/2
May i say this is one of the best stories i have every read. It even outshines some published books! I can't wait to finally catch up on the story and get to chapter 71! :)
BronyHawkS117 chapter 71 . 4/1
I wish all the other authors I follow worked like you do. Thanks for keeping up on such a good story!
SkullSlim690 chapter 71 . 3/30
Awesome, I do look forward to the next chapter. :)
DragonLord RyuKizoku chapter 71 . 3/30
GASP! Not friendship! How could friendship possibly be the answer?! No, clearly the changlings must make war and forcefully steal love! It's not like ponies are capable of freely giving it! We should know, we've been forcefully taking it for years! We-


changlings when Aurora gets back to the hive
headreviewer mk2 chapter 70 . 3/27
well I can tell how the rest of that conversation goes
Twilight: James that is impossible
James: no its not we humans despite not having magic actuly made a giant machine to recreate one
Twilight: your insane
james: you have to be inorder for progress to be made
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