|Reviews for The God Particle|
| criketsnipa chapter 43 . 11/29/2012
Ohhh this is going to be fun! Another well put together chapter sir. What happens next is sure to be even better!
| dr.evil99 chapter 43 . 11/29/2012
I was pleased to see a string theorist in the group of scientists... that bit from way back when about the "weaver" being kinda had my brain thinking in terms of string theory, and I do love scientific theories that are so far out as to almost be magic themselves. Cant wait to see more reaction from Team Celestia.
| Skultux chapter 42 . 11/22/2012
For the love of equestria, update!
| Spectral Volta chapter 42 . 11/13/2012
the poor filly ...
| AvvSoar chapter 42 . 11/4/2012
Wow twilight sure can energize a crowd, and I can't wait to know what Sweeite Belle's. Update soon.
| Omnicron25 chapter 42 . 11/2/2012
I like the James helping out the town portion, but wow ... A LIGHTNING BOLT! Sweetie Belle is one powerful little filly! Her cutie mark does make me curious though.
I find it interesting that most politicians on Earth wouldn't think twice about going into areas like that and would just stay where they were and out of danger. I respect Equestrian politicians—I use the term loosely since I have no idea how to address that type of governmental figures—immensely for their "hooves-on" approach—even in the show.
I do have to say I was a bit surprised the Council so readily agreed with Twilight to let her go to Ponyville on such short notice.
Anyway, no complaints for you this time either, but don't get lazy! If I see something I will jump at it! Lol! Good job, and as always, I wish you the utmost luck in your ventures! I eagerly await the next chapter!
| Velociraptor256 chapter 42 . 11/2/2012
I love Twilight's speech, and Sweetie Belle's cutie mark is intriguing. Could it mean that she's going to bear the Element of Magic one day?
| MorbidWerewolf chapter 42 . 11/2/2012
Aw... Sweetie Belle's cutie mark sounds beautiful. :)
| Skultux chapter 42 . 11/1/2012
Wow, can't wait for the next chapter!
| Omnicron25 chapter 41 . 10/27/2012
I approve! This chapter was certainly gloomy and awkward in some parts, but the end was heart-warming. Eric has certainly becoming a well-developed OC. The only thing I wonder is what exactly is going to happen when the students arrive? I hope Eric is good at keeping things from boiling over and managing other people, because this could get messy fast if not.
Well, I didn't see any problems with grammar or spelling, but I do have to wonder how much money Eric has ... I mean ... good grief! I know that type of work gives one a sizable salary, but is he dipping into his retirement fund or something? He spending a pretty penny fast. I empathize with him wanting to give Celestia the best, but ... he's going to have to penny-pinch at some point. Maybe that's just my poverty upbringing talking, but ... never-mind. I would like to see some more of Celestia POV at some point. I found you wrote it well last time, and found it both amusing and fascinating. Although, I'm sure you have that entire arc planned by now.
Alright, enough gripping from me! You did a good job getting all the elements set-up so far, and I eagerly await the next chapter. Have the utmost luck!
| AvvSoar chapter 41 . 10/26/2012
And so it begins indeed.
| Oggeleet chapter 41 . 10/26/2012
Sorry, my heart stopped for a second because of the epic this is.
My only thought for this chapter is "AWESOME".
I sincerely wish i had some constructive criticism, but i dont.
All i have is pretty much update more, but thats what everyone wants is it not?
| ezequieltriple7 chapter 41 . 10/26/2012
...and so it begins.
| Omnicron25 chapter 40 . 10/24/2012
This is one of the reasons why, if I some how get ported to Equestria in whatever form, I would never make Twilight Sparkle angry. I have to feel sorry for Gilda, but it's not like I empathize with her. No, pity would be more accurate. I hope all this stress does not make Twilight experience one of her 'insanity episodes' like what happened in Lesson Zero. That would be disastrous.
Anyway, not much to say for this chapter other than: I feel it's the calm before the storm, and the storm is going to be a doozy. I don't think one needs Pinkie Sense to figure that out. No major grammar or spelling errors, that I noticed, so good job on that too.
Congratulations on your fortieth chapter, EquZephyr! I await the next chapter with much anticipation, and I wish you the utmost luck in your ventures!
| criketsnipa chapter 40 . 10/22/2012
I love this story. For a bunch of reasons. Firstly,it is very well written. Big words, well constructed storyline, and wonderful structure. The chapters are also just the right length for me, just enough to satisfy my thirst. The character interaction as well as the dialog are also first rate. All I can really say is this: Keep up the good work sire, I have truly enjoyed what I have read thus far.