|Reviews for A Guiding Hand: 'A Slap in the Face'|
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/10
Oh my loved it thanks for the story and chapter and share your thoughts and talent with all of us who are reading your stories
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26
Very nice story
| Sarai chapter 1 . 1/3
I like it.
| Junior VB chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
| Thatx1xchick chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
You know after I read this I watched the show and I'm so glad I did. I love that show! Thank you so much. :)
| oldtime chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
another good one
| Just-Met-A-Girl-Named-Maria chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Great story! Loved how Matthew broke down seeing her bruised cheek. So good!
| Liz86000 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Well, I for one don't think hitting children will make them understand their mistakes. It will make them fear you, and understand that it's the one who hits the hardest who is respected, which is a bad message.
Now, that said... I must say that with Matthew punching Sully (after hitting Dr Mike), well... I could see Sully hitting him. After all, we are all human. But I think it's what Sully said that worked on Matthew, not the violence.
| LenniluvsBrian chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
He SO deserved worse than what he got! Lol.
| patbor chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I thought you had their characters down pretty good. I always wondered why they didn't lay the law down or have Sully get into it more with Matthew. I thought TPTB let Matthew grow up way to fast. (The powers that be)
| Kat A. Fonell chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
| Ketterly chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I really liked this! Love Sully as a father figure. Hoping the third installment is with Brian! There were plenty of times that he could have used a little tough love.
| IMSLES chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Matthew learned a lesson on being a man, even while being treated like a 'boy'. Seeing the errors in his actions, words and decisions is a giant step in growing up.
| TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I really enjoyed your story. I agree that Sully seems like he would have done a little more 'guiding' with the boys at least. It was really sweet when he saw his Ma's face how broken up poor Matther was. This was one of my most favorite series so i really enjoyed it. Good job Jamie!
| BobWhite chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
good story. Try not using 'yaw' so much, they didn't use that word back then. I mean i know i use a bunch of words that weren't used back then, but that's bc i have brain farts in the middle of writing stories and adlib a bunch of words from this day and age to that day and age