What a roller coaster! It would be terribly mean to lose two men like that. I know it happens, in fact someone I know lost 2 husbands by the time she was 30, one to an asthma attack and another in a car accident. Life isn't always fair.

Gasp! nononnoonnoonnooo!

So Edward passed the Charlie test with flying colours.
I was really sad that Jessica's parents reacted that way. It was their chance to step up and be the adults in the situation, and instead they were a total fail.

Teenage drama's are always worrisome, but with so much at stake, people don't always behave well.
Meeting the parents...!

I think after all the earlier confusion between them, Edward did the right thing. He obviously needs to know she loves him too before becoming more intimate with Bella. Its nice to see that some people still have morals and patience :)

How come he always comes to her place? Does she know where he lives yet?

That was very fitting

I know she needs some processing time but please don't string it out for too long

Wow! Thats a nice red herring

Cant review...brain mushy...hot kiss!

I'm pleased that Mike came to his senses. I hope Edward doesn't get posted away from PA. That was a lovely ending. Thanks for writing.

Bella's subconscious recognises what is going on.
Btw, looovvvve Goonies!

I'm with Bella; his behaviour is very confusing. He needs to explain or cut her loose permanently (even though I know this is a fanfic so I'm expecting a damn good HEA!)

Bella should have vomited on Jake again so Edward could keep carrying her ;)

I think Edward is a bit confused. He wouldn't have been ready for the baggage, although everyone has some of one sort or another. I don't think he is being deliberately mean thouhg...