Reviews for Semper Paratus: That Others May Live |
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MsLiss chapter 8 . 4/14/2021 He’s such an ass Non answers for Bella Will she push and ask? Or let it go? Thank you |
MsLiss chapter 7 . 4/14/2021 Oh I’d love to be in Edward’s head Thank you |
MsLiss chapter 6 . 4/14/2021 Oh dear I can see what Edward was doing But Bella didn’t take it well No going with the flow for her She’s still very confused internally It would be hard to relax I suppose Thank you |
MsLiss chapter 5 . 4/14/2021 Jacob needs to check himself Thank you |
MsLiss chapter 4 . 4/14/2021 It would be scary not knowing him But that’s what the dates are for of course Thank you |
MsLiss chapter 3 . 4/14/2021 He is so cheeky And Bella doesn’t know which way is up Thank you |
morena.davidson.3 chapter 25 . 4/13/2021 Lovely story. I love that the story showed how important it is to have 2nd chances. I love the faith, love, and forgiveness that you wove throughout the story. They are so important. Thanks for sharing. xo |
Barbell21 chapter 22 . 12/5/2020 Ha. I get it. Like it’s sweet and all to want to marry and to do it in front of god and i know they actually mean it. But this sounds like such a line that a teenage boy would tell a girl to get into her pants lmao I couldn’t read it seriously |
acw1 chapter 25 . 2/26/2020 Great |
athome Jo chapter 25 . 6/23/2019 Good story! Thanks for sharing. :) |
VryUnique chapter 16 . 11/7/2018 So glad they didn't have sex out there on the beach, I was a bit horrified. It didn't seem like an ideal place for their first time. |
VryUnique chapter 15 . 11/7/2018 I was wondering about Rosalie's and Emette's relationship, sounds like she still loved him. |
VryUnique chapter 14 . 11/6/2018 I'm glad she forgave him. I hate to think that Emette thought Edward planted the drugs and tried to ruin his career. Hopefully Emette knew it was Edward directly. |
VryUnique chapter 13 . 11/6/2018 I think Bella is overreacting, Edward didn't pursue her because she was Emette's widow and backed off after freaking out once he found out. What Edward did to Emette was between him and Emette and he was really just a kid. So what is Bella mad at? What he did to Emette or because he didn't come clean right away? I think Edward not coming clean immediately is the only thing Bella has a right to really be mad at and I feel that was still understandable if not bit cowardly. |
VryUnique chapter 12 . 11/6/2018 My first thought was brothers but that couldn't be right, it would have been almost impossible for them not to meet by now. Childhood best friend? Cousin? I'll guess childhood friend. Riley didn't seem like an ass... so far. |