Reviews for Semper Paratus: That Others May Live
MsLiss chapter 8 . 4/14/2021
He’s such an ass
Non answers for Bella
Will she push and ask?
Or let it go?
Thank you
MsLiss chapter 7 . 4/14/2021
Oh I’d love to be in Edward’s head
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MsLiss chapter 6 . 4/14/2021
Oh dear
I can see what Edward was doing
But Bella didn’t take it well
No going with the flow for her
She’s still very confused internally
It would be hard to relax I suppose
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MsLiss chapter 5 . 4/14/2021
Jacob needs to check himself
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MsLiss chapter 4 . 4/14/2021
It would be scary not knowing him
But that’s what the dates are for of course
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MsLiss chapter 3 . 4/14/2021
He is so cheeky
And Bella doesn’t know which way is up
Thank you
morena.davidson.3 chapter 25 . 4/13/2021
Lovely story. I love that the story showed how important it is to have 2nd chances. I love the faith, love, and forgiveness that you wove throughout the story. They are so important. Thanks for sharing. xo
Barbell21 chapter 22 . 12/5/2020
Ha. I get it. Like it’s sweet and all to want to marry and to do it in front of god and i know they actually mean it. But this sounds like such a line that a teenage boy would tell a girl to get into her pants lmao I couldn’t read it seriously
acw1 chapter 25 . 2/26/2020
Great
athome Jo chapter 25 . 6/23/2019
Good story! Thanks for sharing. :)
VryUnique chapter 16 . 11/7/2018
So glad they didn't have sex out there on the beach, I was a bit horrified. It didn't seem like an ideal place for their first time.
VryUnique chapter 15 . 11/7/2018
I was wondering about Rosalie's and Emette's relationship, sounds like she still loved him.
VryUnique chapter 14 . 11/6/2018
I'm glad she forgave him. I hate to think that Emette thought Edward planted the drugs and tried to ruin his career. Hopefully Emette knew it was Edward directly.
VryUnique chapter 13 . 11/6/2018
I think Bella is overreacting, Edward didn't pursue her because she was Emette's widow and backed off after freaking out once he found out. What Edward did to Emette was between him and Emette and he was really just a kid. So what is Bella mad at? What he did to Emette or because he didn't come clean right away? I think Edward not coming clean immediately is the only thing Bella has a right to really be mad at and I feel that was still understandable if not bit cowardly.
VryUnique chapter 12 . 11/6/2018
My first thought was brothers but that couldn't be right, it would have been almost impossible for them not to meet by now. Childhood best friend? Cousin? I'll guess childhood friend.
Riley didn't seem like an ass... so far.
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