Reviews for Mine
tudee chapter 4 . 6/27
Just found your story and let me tell you it is surely hot. Almost too hot. LOVE the way they both are so open with each other and how so loving and caring he is with her. How he made sure she was ready and not moving forward in less she made it clear it was what she wanted. AND...You ended it when it was just getting really really hot. I want more! Lol.
Nicole chapter 4 . 4/18
Plz finish this story
arses21 chapter 4 . 10/28/2014
Wow! This is SO amazing! Sigh, I love how is so patient with her. I'd love to see his dominant side come out even more:-) I'll live with eternal hope that someday you'll add more to this story!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2014
So awesome! Wow! I just found this story & I loved how you ended chapter one, with him giving a command. Baby Girl is gonna be one happy woman!
Mizohu chapter 2 . 3/25/2014
I really enjoy the way this is writen the story has a very good promise of being great.
Danni613 chapter 4 . 11/6/2013
Absolutely love it! Completely!

Here4Funsies chapter 4 . 10/15/2013
Lawd! *fans self*

More please lol.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
i LOve it.
Mist17 chapter 4 . 3/7/2013
Little Green Rose chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
Love it! Update please?
anomalyblue chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
Excuse me while I go outside in my silk robe and 30 F... Whew sizzle sizzle... ahem now please continue!
Amber-Jade James chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
Very hot! Great storie!

Cheers, AJ James
Delilah Genevieve Rose chapter 4 . 10/4/2012
Next chapter still coming? Love this story!
anneryn7 chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Looooooove it!
Anime Princess chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
I hope you update ASAP!
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