|Reviews for A Broken Lyre|
| Trixie Shot chapter 4 . 1/25
Help me! There are invisible ninjas chopping onions
| Time Spinner chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
I LOVE your stories! one youtuber (I don't remember his name) did a reading of a precious rainbow, and I loved every minute of it! you're so awesome!
| cameron maden chapter 4 . 5/14/2013
i loved this fanfic it was well writen and i cryed all the way through it i hope to read more of your future works thank you for wrighting this
| Proud brony chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, the best one is tied between yours and gentle dream both very very very good stories
| VivaLaVida123 chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
Great. Sad, but works very well. DAMN YOU PINKIE.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
It's good, but grammatical errors hold the story back.
| Olivaceous chapter 4 . 8/21/2012
Wonderful fanfic, it was nice read from Lyra's point of view during the events of "a precious rainbow." I loved reading miles' series, and I think yours fits in well as a lovelly little side story.
| Midlight Dasher chapter 2 . 8/22/2012
All of these feels? Sir, you've out done yourself.
| Clockwork Dreamer chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
This is probably the best fanfiction that I've read singularly based on Lyra and Bonbon's relationship. I especially love the tone of rememberence along with a sad undertone that exposes the fact that bonbon was murdered by Pinkie Pie.
| Questionable Object chapter 4 . 1/14/2012
Not a bad story.
The grammar could be better but it was readable so no issues.
Might wanna work on smoothing out the flow of the story.
Enjoyable read none the less.
| Alaina De'Lamoure chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
This is sad but a good story,it really makes you feel for lyra . Above all who would of thought that all these great works could come from one horror fanfiction.
| milesprower06 chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
Another great piece! Looking forward to part 4. I wonder what was in that letter...
| The Socialist chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
Awesome, I hope you continue this. I did feel a sting of pity for berry so pls don't let her spiral out of controll.
| DreadedCandiru2 chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
This is fairly nice; we not only get to see Lyra coming out into the world again, we get a call-back to Derpy's issues with klutzing out at the worst possible time and questionable sense of direction. It doesn't make her stupid, it just makes her sort of like Pony!Ryouga.
| Anon1025 chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
I signed up just to say, my god, this is just... I don't know what to say. When Lyra said "Goodbye, Bonbon, and thank you." I was almost to tears and that isn't easy, I felt a genuine streak of pain and sadness run through my gut at that point. Thank you so much for this beautiful story, it really touched me.