Reviews for Orphaned
LadyEudave05 chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
Plz update soon
otaku-chan2000 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
i like how its starting out, will there be more chapters?
wolfeater chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
please...continue
almondeyes97 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Awwwww it's sooo cute! Pleasee i need the second chapter!
lonelygirl148 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
It was good. I will be more then place if you can make anthor one if you can do it.
Hatake Sakura Love chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
awwww so cute! I want a new chapter!
Evie Glacier Tako chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
This story intrigues me but I want to reserve judgement until there is more to judge. I hope you plan on updating this story as I see it has potential.
Kyunika chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Love it so far. It has the makings of a good story. Just make sure not to rush it. When writing fiction, details are your best friend. You want to write as many details as you can without losing the audience. Good luck. Ja Ne. Kyunika.
edvy8 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Vy: AWWWW! so sweet! naru and sasuke now watch over a child.

Envy: yeah have fun with that.

Edward glares: Envy...you better change you're tone or you'll py the consequences.

Envy gulps: Oh yay! they have a child! that so great!

Vy shakes head: anyway love the story the story. can't wait to see sasuke's reaction. *waves*
Hakudoushi kawaii ne chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I'm intrigued, however like you admitted at the end, it's kinda all over the place and at times it feels a bit rushed. I still like it though... I think... but I do know I'd like to see an update. So, Pretty please?

haku.
tinlizzie81592 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I am totally interested! I have never read a story on this topic so you should write another chapter!
Amorphous Entity chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Please update soon! Fallen-chan out! -
invisible-gurl chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
awwwww soooo cute! XD great job and plz update soon
zero98 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
PLEASE PUT UP MORE CHAPTERS ITS GOOD
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Hmmmm really interesting. A good start. More?