Reviews for A Lover's Quarrel
BrownFeather chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Hi there!

critique:
enough smut
yet enough plot
it was romantic
and well written

-you did describe them ending the whole thing (orgasm short dialogue - end) a bit too quick, imho, but that doesn'z matter much because the rest was interesting, and hot! So, yeah, I like it. :)
mfG chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
You just wrote the best smutty and yet romantic one shot about them I've ever read so far (and I read a lot) Sooo cool! Thanks for uploading this!
Gaasuba chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
You had me up until Austria started swearing like a sailor. His reasoning for being upset was very well done. However, his way of showing he was upset was very out of character. He was acting more like a moody teenager than an ageless aristocrat. Good writing style, but work on your character portrayal.
CapriciousUke chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Aww, that was so cute in a smutty sort of way! :3
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
xD You have a thing for PruAus, don't you?
intact chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I loved it! I thought it was cute! and I love Austria being on top for once, pretty sexy! ;)
Kay the Beta chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Mmmm. Gotta love me some power-bottom Roddy! Oh hey, Bonsai! This was very well done. I've seen quite a few of "sex-guru Gilbert" fics, but unsure and awkward Gilbert...not so much. What a refreshing take. Your A/N at the end there made me laugh, too(same with the line about "Austrian planning." Roddy would so be the anal planning type...no pun intended...okay so kind of intended). You are just full of sass, now aren't ya? What better revenge than writing out two fine lookin' gents getting it on! Cheers till later, love!
KakashiFangirlOfDOOM chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Whoa O.O

That was...SO SEXY!

You're officially my favorite person in the word now xD
The Phantom Devil chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
that was good! Roderich getting annoyed about NOT (i don't know how to italicize XD) having sex is new :)) your sense of humor is really amusing and the way you write Roderich's anxiety and paranoia is totally believable :D as for Gilbert, his apprehension is both amusing and (in Roddy's point of view) a bit annoying, and ...well kinda sweet too :))

good job! :D and yes, fanfics are a good distraction XD

..actually, they're too good...
FanSlewFantasy chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
YOU!

I recognised your penname and was all like "hkajs hdskcamnzxh cs slbdckbc! No way! I wonder what this person writes like!" and so I started reading it and I got halfway through and I was too impressed and so I reviewed before I finished reading.

This. There is no word for the beauty that is this fic. I love you.

Write moar porn. For the love of all things Yaoi, write moar porn.

-FSF