Oh, wow! :) I'm looking forward to what will happen next week.

Are you messing with my emotions? Will we get it a day early or do I have to wait another 24 hours before chapter 18?

YES SEVERUS, YES MY BOY, IT'S YOUR CHOICE TO MAKE. LIVE YOUR DREAMS!
Though, now, knowing your Albus, I'm afraid of what's coming next.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

OMG, you're back!

*Cries tears of joy*

I thought you abandoned this story. I am so happy.

Now I gotta reread this masterpiece since it has been so long.

AND YOU ARE GOING TO FINISH IT?!

Is today my birthday?

Because this is by far the best birthday present ever!

Forever thank you!

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The cliffhanger... why I have the feeling that won't end good to Severus? :(

Dumbledore you bastard

Wow. I just discovered your story and now I'm hooked. The uncertainty in it makes it so very interesting. I really want to know what exactly is a trick of the mind and what's real.

It's so hard to judge how threatened Severus is in reality because events have been so confusing. I can't even decide yet whether Dumbledore really is malign or if Severus's perceptions are infecting mine!.
I've got this weird, completely unfounded fear that his clever and adorable Mesi is all in my mind.
I love how he turns to mush for her and can't even discard a dead spider for fear of being caught.
I wish the humans around him were a tenth as perceptive. It feels like he's drowning and all the people around him are ignoring the trouble he's in.

Oh, wow! :) I can't wait until next Thursday! :) I liked that Severus isn't giving in to Albus' taunts. I'm excited to see what you have planned next! :)

Until next week

Dumbledore is really making a mistake here, I think. If he needs Severus then he should change his attitude. I wonder what Severus will do next. This is an excellent psychological thriller fic. Thanks for updating so regularly.

Loved it. As a mum of two cats, I enjoy the way you write them - and relate - and was pleased Minerva interacted with Severus ahah. Looking forward to the update!

This seems splendid

I really want to see what plan Severus come with , cuz hes such a warrior

Just found your story. Can't wait to read what comes next.

My heart hurts when I read this... Poor Severus... I don't like this Dumbledore one bit, yikes... But I'm curious what's to come!
And I want to hug Severus - is that OK?

Poor Severus! Even if all that DID happen in his mind, he must be just sick! And Dumbledore saying "go to your death, I hope its quick" that's just disgusting!