Reviews for Red Festival
PokemonRules chapter 1 . 4/18
Love the story... continuing writing ,
PenguinOverlord chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Pretty awesome. I wanted to write a story on Red's birthday but never got around to it (stupid lazyness) but HEY! Awesome story!
xxx chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
There a lot of grammar errors. You need to fix that. Despise that the story is cute.
Another forgotten account chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
This was cute, and so funny :D

The grammar could use a little help, but all in all, it was a great story idea.
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
So funny hahahaha, I can't stop laughing, especially this:

"Do you know what day is it?"

"R-Red festival," answered Yellow stutterly. ARGHH! This is frustating.

Great job, my friend~