|Reviews for One by One|
| BelleinWonderland chapter 33 . 3/10
Very good fic. I really enjoyed this and its companion story. Though I do wish we had more SB/HG romantic moments- especially when they were younger. Would have wanted more kisses and such. Also, at times the fics were a little confusing ... like, I don't understand why Hermione hates Snape when time travels back. Didn't she know by then that Dumbledore asked Snape to kill him? Oh, well. They're well written stories. I really liked Paradox too!
| Written Fire chapter 33 . 3/8/2013
I love the way you ended this.
This and Before the Dawn are my favorite Sirius/Hermione fics that I have ever read.
I've read each a handful of times and recommended them to others.
Simply amazing work.
| Linnea chapter 33 . 2/3/2013
I was just browsing tumblr and found the passage where Hermoine reads and Sirius wants to take her to to Hogsmeade, and suddenly found myself having spent the past few hours read Before the Dawn and One by One, and they were great! I cried and cried and I think I'm going to need to re-read a few passages again. Possibly the entire thing.
I'm a sucker for time travel, especially time-travel that involves complicated love stories that are full of complications and paradoxes, so this was right up my alley.
Yeah, I really need to re-read the stories again, and it's going to be a genuine pleasure.
Thank you for writing them and putting them up here!
| sashlery chapter 11 . 12/1/2012
11 chapters into the sequel and I'm still crying like a baby.
| alphayamergo chapter 33 . 11/24/2012
I just finished Before the Dawn and One By One in one big go. I think I cried three times. And and and and why did you do this to me? All of these emotions -
But yes, I think it is safe to say (because of the crying and stuff) that this is amazingly written and it's so good. It's brilliant.
| hellkat121 chapter 33 . 11/9/2012
Well I hope that after HG lived SB remembered to charm the locket and give it to her... otherwise this twisted circle will end up quite broken! What a wonderful happy ending though!
| yay chapter 33 . 10/1/2012
It's like a time loop-de-loop.
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/10/2012
loved it! Thank you for the story.
| BretheBabbit chapter 33 . 4/5/2012
I wanted to quit this so many times even though I love the story. You had me worried there about the ending, like a tarantino where by the end you forgot that you know how it'll go cause you seen it at the beginning. This is a fave
| SpeedDemon315 chapter 33 . 3/22/2012
I could not stop reading this story, from start to finished I was glued. I had to know how it was all going to end. Plus, the beautiful descriptions and how you display Hermione inner struggles and torment, showing us a sliver of how difficult it is to not saying anything when you know you have the power to save so many people but can't because it ruin everything else. It's amazing that Hermione didn't go completely insane from all the rules and regulations.
Your work always continues to awe me, I look forward to reading more. Keep up the wonderful writing!
| ChimericalParoxysm chapter 33 . 3/4/2012
Oh thank god! I was so worried that nothing was going to've changed. I was actually really frustrated the first half-frustrated that she didn't seem to have learned from her first time around. But she did, and I adore the idea that she might do even better the next time. (Yay paradox!)
One of my favourite moments in this was when she acknowledged that Harry and Ron would always be her best friends. In the previous one it was the little moments of potent past-when she saw Sirius' letter from Harry, when she got the jumper from Mrs. Weasley-that were most beautiful. I was pleased to see that sentiment reflected here, too.
Again, feeling pretty content to just love this. There was a typo somewhere in there (has instead of as or something), but I don't suppose that matters in the grand scheme of things *chuckles*
The balance between angst and laughter was slightly more equal here haha, but still quite angsty. Ever considered using your powers for good instead of evil? ;)
One final thing-about the time travel. I really respect that you were brave enough to just say, "Huh, I don't know how she landed herself in the past. Must've been magic," rather than coming up with something absolutely contrived or over-used. I also love that you were brave enough to envision a situation in which Hermione -didn't- come back from the past, in which she -had- to stick it out. It feels more genuine to me-though maybe that's because it's the option most rarely carried out.
At any rate, you have spectacular talent, and I'm more than pleased to have stumbled across these fics. Thank you for all the work that you must have put into them.
| 93 Diagon Alley chapter 33 . 2/15/2012
Ohhh, I'm so glad they got their happy ending! And that she saved Fred!
This story, and its presequel, or however you want to call it, was amazing. I really appreciated how, despite the melancholy feel to almost every chapter, you still managed to not let the reader lose hope. You did an excellent job :)
| Asterisks chapter 33 . 2/13/2012
Oh thank you thank you! For giving them their happy ending! They deserved it so much. Wish I could replace this for canon, it's just so great.
| rockrose chapter 33 . 1/30/2012
This story is utter perfection. I loved every minute. I was ready for her to die. I knew it was going to happen, and I was prepared.
And then she didn't. And I was soooo happy. I'm so glad they finally, finally got their happy ending. They deserve it.
I know you're done with this story, but I really hope in the future we get at least a few one shots of their life together- maybe how they decide to get married, their wedding, and a few other key moments.
This was one of the best fics I've read, and I'm sure I will re-read it many times over in the future.
| Jani chapter 33 . 1/29/2012
Thanks for the story! I wasn't sure what to expect as it seemed to be headed in the same direction - great job changing things up :)