|Reviews for Tortured Soul|
| Aleaster chapter 13 . 7/23/2013
Uhh, you probably already know this, but you copy pasted the truck scene twice into the chapter. It was a good scene though, so no complaints :)
| Zangetsu12 chapter 13 . 7/23/2013
Great story so far. I like how videl is slowly progressing into caring more about things so that's good. Another thing is how funny i found out that you posted the same thing twice, just wanted to make sure i wasn't crazy or something
| shugokage chapter 13 . 7/23/2013
Awesome job on this chapter and the progression of the story!
| dcp1992 chapter 10 . 7/9/2013
Great story so far! Though I read this before but I went back and read it and realised I read chapter 11 and 12 and not anything else... This is definitely an interesting story and the way Videl's soul has pretty much Tortured since she was 16 from a heroin to a killer... though she thought it was for the good. (love how that's actually the title too)
At first i didn't know how it was going to get to this point (chapter 11 & 12) since the start was like it was and she seemed like she was working for a bad compony like Gohan though until Bulma said it was actually a good agency just led by a power hungry person. It was nice how Videl had progressed from the start to now (chapter 12), I just hope she starts to trust Gohan and his friend more and stops doubting his feeling for her. I know she's been through alot and that's why she is so defensive by him since most people just tried to use her for the past 7 years.
I also like how Gohan's character is and how not going to HS has affected him somewhat. Yes he is successful, but missing HS made him kinda an outcast but it also looks like he kinda had a backbone which it good.
Cannot wait to see how the agency reacts to the information they got and also how Gohan and Videl continue to progress, hopefully she trust him and not completely blow him off. Get to know each other. Update soon
| alexanaxela chapter 12 . 6/21/2013
i need to know what happens next :(
| NoTailjinchuuriki chapter 7 . 6/13/2013
Remarkable how Videl still believes that Hercule killed Cell.
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/7/2013
Videl needs to trust gohan. Goten seem very smart for his age in this story and want's videl blood for almost killing gohan. Gohan needs to kill the men that threaten him and his family and vegeta might join in, to make sure saiyans living in earth is kept a secret from the government and public. Add rough lemon scenes in this story.
| NiceNipps chapter 11 . 6/2/2013
Took me a few days to finally read this chapter and loved every minute of it. Can't wait for what happens next ;)
| Talimancer chapter 12 . 5/30/2013
this is a really enjoyable fic, keep it up
| nancy103 chapter 12 . 5/29/2013
"I met him after he killed a biologically engineered chimera that regurgitated me out of his body. That's complicated." LOL! I love 18 and this line is just perfect! Thanks for the update and great chapter!
| Gabriel-TDO chapter 12 . 5/29/2013
You should add some of the mystical stuff like knowing the guardian of Earth, just to give her some more brain pain.
| saiyanstripes chapter 12 . 5/29/2013
hmm, very interesting that we get to see videl discovering things about gohan from a different perspective. seems like 18 is the right person to 'befriend' videl in this situation. maybe the two will form a closer bond. its true that videl has seen a lot more of the world because of the agency than she would have in canon hmm very interesting. first time seeing videl's old friends, will there be a reunion? i cant see sharpener being so forgiving for the lie, erasa maybe. anyway, a nice smooth chapter, good to see that the issues between them have not been brushed under the carpet in favor of a quick happily ever after like in a lot of fics. update soon.
| dcp1992 chapter 12 . 5/28/2013
GReat chapter! Seems like Videl is still second guessing herself a lot. Hopefully she can start to trust people and Gohand friends, and trust that Gohan likes her and her Gohan. Update soon!
| Flashohol chapter 9 . 5/28/2013
I don't think Videl would use a traffic accident as a method of assassination, too much risk of collateral damage. Equal risk of killing the person or persons the target crashes into. People cars buildings etc. Other than that loven it so far.
| shugokage chapter 12 . 5/28/2013
Wow another amazing chapter and I really like how much Videl still has to discover about her world!