Reviews for Proper Motivation
Julie.fjad chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
I love your story, but please correct your French? These are the correct formulations - I thought you'd want to get it right .
J'ai une reservation pour deux personnes; je m'appelle Malfoy.
Peut-on avoir un moment avant de commander?
Vous avez fait votre choix?
On a choisi, ce sera la même chose pour nous deux: comme hors d'oeuvres, le carpaccio de coquille St Jacques avec le Chateau (...) Comme plat principal, le magret (...) avec le Beau... [this wine doesn't really make sense to me...]. Puis, l'assiette de fromages accompagnée du Dom Perignon Brute, et finalement, comme dessert, les Crêpes Suzette avec du café.
Great menu, by the way, some of my favourite dishes are among it x
ImaBraxton chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
This is a wonderful Lucius/Hermione pairing fanfic! Really hot...
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
though I do not at all condone infidelity, I must mention I love Lucius and Hermione together.
vampiress94 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Hello there!
I really like your story but your use of french is a little ...
It is my native language, maybe I could translate it correctly for you, if it's okay with you of course.
Anyway this is definitely one of the (very) few stories about LuciusxHermione that I loved so ... GREAT JOB!
Lignala chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
It was a nice story. Such a charmer this Lucius, though usually I prefer stories portraying Severus as Hermione partner.

But I couldn't help to be bothered by the French, I'm French, and it always put me off to read google translated French, would you like for me to correct it ? (I'm not saying this to be mean, just to put more verisimilitude into your story. And the same way I appreciate when people correct my English, I'd like to extend the nicety to you). chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
Loved it
KatieMarrie chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
That was hotter than hell. . . I think I need to hop into an ice cold shower now. . . Great one shot!
zingara1 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Awesome story! :D !
PhoenixPixie chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
AH man... I want to know more!... what does Draco think? and Harry? are they together and if so, then what is Ron to do when he finds out his wife is leaving him for a Malfoy! Oh so many things!
Lynn chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Beautifully written. I’m not usually up to pairing Hermione with other canon characters, but it’s utter blasphemy not to fall in love with this piece. I have not spotted any mistakes and the last scene was perfectly paced.
peny.lane chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Super super great and fantastic! I can't wait to read more!
rose chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
for the love of lucius/hermione lovers around the world PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY !
Smithback chapter 1 . 8/8/2011