Reviews for Delicious
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
Hello. This is a very cute little story here. I totally "get" how she feels, too. So I enjoyed it! Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Suzy-Chapstick chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
Terrific, and right on point!
tff000 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
good
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
Very good. I loved Edward's matter of fact thinking. It was just what she needed.
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
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archy12 chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
This is beautiful! Edward said the right thing-nothing he would say would make Bella change her perspective, but her weight had nothing to do with their relationship.
Beauty is in the eye of the holder. Wow!
I laughed so hard when I read about Edward talking and singing to his food. I do that too, well the instructing and admonishing part. The singing is just for myself. :D
sue1zide chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
Bella's weight was in her mind?
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
This was nice thank you
TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
Delicious has been added to the Featured Fics Library on www . twifanfictionrecs . com ;-)
starsmina chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
I love this story because it deals with the bad four letter word "DIET" and the evil "FAT". I like how you showed that Edward told Bella what he did and wish more people would think like that
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
I THOUGHT IT WAS SILLY AND FUNNY AND TOTALLY NOT BELLA AND EDWARD BUT I LOVED IT
puasluoma chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
Very good!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
This is one of my favorite stories on the site. You are a great writer and I love how this story is so real. I feel like anyone who has been uncomfortable with their body at one point or another can completely relate to Bella, and has probably been in their own version of the whole Emmett's sweatshirt hate-spiral situation. Also loved the realistic ending, that him telling her she's beautful doesn't completely fix all of Bella's issues!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
So bitter sweet
Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Great story
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