Reviews for Let's play Fishcake
Sabere Commander chapter 9 . 3/24
When are you rewriting this?
Sabere Commander chapter 8 . 3/24
I skipped most... I won't lie... It would be pretty funny to see Naruto grow a fox tail, considering he has A LOT MORE demon fox chakra than Kushina... I want to see an out of control Fox cloak/4 tailed Naruto soon...
Sabere Commander chapter 7 . 3/23
Review,

*Grins Evilly* And so the madness begins...
Sabere Commander chapter 6 . 3/23
Review,

Meh... It was okay... It felt more so like a filler episode than anything else...

Rating,

1 Sexy alien cat lady out of 5
Sabere Commander chapter 5 . 3/23
Review,

Better than last chapter, I'm pretty sure her breasts were compared to fruits, not implants. I am seriously expecting some Kyuubi action! SERIOUSLY! 4 tailed release FOR THE WIN!
Sabere Commander chapter 4 . 3/23
Review,

Okay, here is the review! While I enjoy your story, I am also finding it increasingly hard to not dislike or re vamp it... Seriously... You have a large number of grammar errors, they seem to have increased, the chapters are definitely shorter, and the characters are acting a bit strange. Not to mention poor dialogue choice...

Reasons,

Well the quality has gone down quite a lot since we began our journey. A LOT of poorly made writing decisions popped up in the story too. The two female nin didn't give a second thought to the missing S Rank nin's claim? Not likely...
Why don't you describe Naruto characters for the Cat Planet Cutie fans?... Sigh... It is just a vary good opportunity that just... was handled wrong and needs to be redone...

Rating,

I give this chapter two Toby masks out of 5... Mainly because the length... and no Naruto xD
Sabere Commander chapter 3 . 3/23
Review,

Hmmm... Could use a little polishing, grammar checks, and a proof reading. I honestly found the hospital scene over rated and so played out that it's beaten corpse has all ready been buried #Quitebeatingadeadhorse. Ummmm, well the ending was a little problematic in my opinion. While the insults were rather entertaining, never knew Kushina was that viscous, they don't necessarily make up for the rushed pace... like the show... huh...

Rating,

Overall I give this chapter 2.5 sexy at women out of 5.

Request,

I know you're going after Kakashi, but would it be too much to ask for a little nine tails action?
Sabere Commander chapter 2 . 3/23
Review,

Her name is Eris, specifying which girl it was can improve the reader response to your story too. It seemed a bit cheesy for my liking, but meh. It's your story and I can only hope it'll get better...
Though for a seven year old, he seemed to be taking this rather well... almost to well... Also is the Kyubi No Kitsune (Kurama/Nine Tails) gonna make an appearance? It would be awesome if it did! (Leave it genderless for more scariness when you add a demonic Naruto, or give it a gender, recommend female, for the funny perverted scenes...)
Sabere Commander chapter 1 . 3/23
Review,

So far, so good. Nothing really makes the story stand out from the prologue alone. Also maybe change the description for the story. I mean more people will read it if the description has some kind of hook. I am only in this section of Fan-Fiction-net because I recently got addicted to. It was awesomely hilarious...

Request,

It would be awesome for a Kakashi x Naruto thing to happen. I mean why else would you make him a female unless you had a relationship planned?
ExodiaGeass8910 chapter 9 . 1/25
I love the story - the major issue I have is that it does NOT flow very well. I'd suggest reading some stories from Freedom Guard and D.K.N. to get a better picture of what I mean.
Cuhar chapter 9 . 7/12/2014
When ninja plays with cats?
Doom Marine 54 chapter 2 . 4/23/2014
Stop giving Naruto clothes from other characters, be original.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/21/2014
the foxy cat girl
AS chapter 9 . 4/19/2014
How about we came to visit a fox
Sao4life chapter 9 . 4/19/2014
Umm hmm cats long lost friend lol
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