Reviews for Illegal Substitution
merwin chapter 6 . 4/8/2012
The story chapters 1-5 sound like the storyline on season 5, I wonder did the writers see your story and used some ideas . Overall, it was good and like the ending Mel still has a her man in love and only truly in love with her .
wsm021 chapter 6 . 11/20/2011
there really isnt enough team janay, it was headed there and then it wasnt but still a nice story.
blueberry24 chapter 6 . 10/25/2011
Aww this story is cute, like its a real episode. Please write more stories for this section cause yoy have a fan
hannahable chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I only have time to read chapter one right now but I am already hooked! You really captured the characters so well and I love the football reference in the title. I like this so much because you didn't portray Janay as the evil baby mama. She's my favorite character. I will be reading more. Thanks for the compliment on my story as well.
aishah33 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I love all 6 chapters...great should work for "The Game" for real.
The Garden Review chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I've only seen commercials for the show but I do love to shop. You've captured that feeling beautifully. Will be featured on TheGardenReview's twitter.