Reviews for Pretty Girl
Oliver Jasmine chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
This is a cool thing. Its so sad and desperately clear she'd grow up to ask too many questions.
Zakeraz chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Wow, that was a dark ending and way off from what I predicted. I thought you were going to write her escaping and becoming Pokemon Hunter J from the Diamond & Pearl anime. When I considered the the possibility that the poacher was one of Ghetsis' kids, imploded my mind. Still, this was a good story.
Mew'smeow chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Wow. You showed (sorry, I don't know how to properly spell portraide!) what life was probably like in Ghetsis's castle. But why didn't you express the most-likely agonizig pain she went through.
CoffeeIncluded chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
YES YES YES. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

This is amazing. Just amazing, and not just because it's my thing. I'd gush more, but I'd have to go.

Just one thing: By *that* scene, J was already dead.

But just a tiny nitpick, and honestly it doesn't matter here. Thank you so much!