Reviews for Pretty Girl
Oliver Jasmine chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
This is a cool thing. Its so sad and desperately clear she'd grow up to ask too many questions.
Zakeraz chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Wow, that was a dark ending and way off from what I predicted. I thought you were going to write her escaping and becoming Pokemon Hunter J from the Diamond & Pearl anime. When I considered the the possibility that the poacher was one of Ghetsis' kids, imploded my mind. Still, this was a good story.
Mew'smeow chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Wow. You showed (sorry, I don't know how to properly spell portraide!) what life was probably like in Ghetsis's castle. But why didn't you express the most-likely agonizig pain she went through.
CoffeeIncluded chapter 1 . 8/8/2011

This is amazing. Just amazing, and not just because it's my thing. I'd gush more, but I'd have to go.

Just one thing: By *that* scene, J was already dead.

But just a tiny nitpick, and honestly it doesn't matter here. Thank you so much!