Reviews for Unforgiven?
WickedInk chapter 2 . 9/26/2015
XD please update soon
plavoko12 chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
great form for short chapters. hopefully you expand your setting though, oh wait, you dont care.
Lynx-Angel chapter 2 . 11/3/2011
Actually a quite interesting story... I wanna see where this is going! _
The Soda-Hunter chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
One thing...moar detail!

Now that Ithink of it why didn't post this sooner?
The Soda-Hunter chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
AH I see your going from that one archive chapter from the comics! BTW You know me on the housepets forum _ (Reconstruction)
katgeek chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
This is Great! Keep going.