Reviews for Memories of Our Friendship
teamkickass chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
ima cry now, you made me cry. T.T

poor Vivi, he had it the worst out of the group, him and Freya..
armlessphelan chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This was good. A bit short, which left me wanting more, but that's a good thing. There's good grammar throughout, and an attempt at hiding who died though anyone familiar with the game could figure it out.

I would have left the ending more ambiguous, rather than stating outright who died, but that's just personal preference. :)
Charlett chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Hey there, nice work on the writing. You did very well showing the sadness of Vivi's death, and I always feel sad that people don't seem to think of Steiner's feelings of Vivi's death; he really did seem attached to the young man as a comrade in arms, which is sometimes closer even than best friends.

Anyway, I really don't have much to say other than "very nice". I was expecting to find some terrible work and I found something cool instead. It was a little depressing, but then again, even sad things can be cathartic.

Thanks again for the read, and good luck on future endeavors!

-Charlett
FlamingoFANgirl chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Very sad. I hate it that Vivi dies. He was my FAVORITE character :(
May-San chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Nice writing!