|Reviews for Harmonic Convergence|
| WiseOldSoul chapter 7 . 1/23
it's a good story.
but it's very painful to read and watch bella's behavior.
wish she was a bit of a bad ass to tell paul to f-k off...
wish it was paul who was feeling all of the way bella is feeling.
i hate how pathetic bella appears and how much power paul
has over her. sure, it's the imprint pull, but how come paul
isn't sounding as pathetic as bella is?
wish you didn't write her like this... know that it's your story but
i am not liking it at all... i read this before and and am re-reading and
reviewing this time and am skipping a lot of the painful pathetic parts
that are written about bella...cuz, it's just too hard to read those parts.
yea, paul has a lot of psychological/mental issues, but he is the one that
should be chasing her, not the other way around...
| Dauntless Initiate Erics girl chapter 21 . 7/17/2015
sorry but once again Bella has proven she doesnt understand how deep Pauls love is for her. she has just been kidnapped and tortured by a vampire and now shes asking him to leave her alone with a vampire regardless of whether Edward helped save her or not.
| Dauntless Initiate Erics girl chapter 14 . 7/17/2015
I dont get? no offense but if his just a friend why keep his name secret? she would be upset if he kept it secret. friends or not shes being unfair by not being truthful with him. not only that but, if it was harmless fun why keep it secret at all even from charlie who is her father? just a few things that came into my head while reading this story. i do like this story so keep up the good work
| WiseOldSoul chapter 17 . 5/23/2015
so thus far, i have enjoyed this story.
it is your original story and i cannot say anything against
however, just one thing i wished that was different in
the story is that...although we see all of the troubled past
that caused paul to become the way he is,
i wished that bella didn't give into him so easily.
so yes, she wanted some time to think, or some distance from
paul when she finds out about him and leah, but really, she doesn't
do any more than that continuing to give into him time and time again.
in reality, it would be sickening for me to hear if my wolf would be
trying to deny the wolf and continue to have sex with someone else.
that would be so heart breaking no matter the reason that i am not sure i
would be able to look at him within such a short period of time without picturing
him with her sexing it up...thus, it would take a long time for that trust to
yea yea, we know bella is kind hearted, innocent, forgiving, etc, but it
only makes her seem like a pushover, no matter how strong a pull of an imprint is...
in fact she should be madder than hell because of the imprinting for what paul did
and perhaps not even talk to him for a long time...until he grovels some more and
suffers some more...
just my 2cents...
other than that, good story...
| Cramos28 chapter 22 . 1/12/2015
Awesome sauce! I loved this story it was remarkable! I never thought I would love Paul and Bella this much but I think I love it more than Edward and Bella and definitely more than Bella and jake
| 2meggles1 chapter 22 . 10/31/2014
Absolutely loved this story and all of your others. You guys are amazing writers! Please continue to write I love them all :)
| sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 22 . 7/25/2014
My eyes are still red from ths story. It was good, had a happy ending, but I just wish there was more time of them being happy after all that happened.
| MusicLovingQt08 chapter 22 . 3/8/2014
Omfg soooo good you gotta do some future takes or a sequel I'm dying to read more you guys are amazing authors
| Child of Music and Dreams chapter 3 . 3/3/2014
No thanks, I'd rather have a half-naked Jake!
| Inlovewithjazz chapter 22 . 2/8/2014
Wow! Thank you!
| Alaina08 chapter 22 . 1/3/2014
this is one of the best stories I've read.
| Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 22 . 12/11/2013
i loved it great happy for paul and bella
| DragonzWingz89 chapter 22 . 12/4/2013
O...M...G! Love, love, love this story! You girls do an amazing job! Im definatly goin to be lookin for more of yalls stories!
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 22 . 10/7/2013
That was just the perfect ending, this was a well written story, good plot, character progression, I liked how you kept Jasper as Pauls friend, great piece of work, and thanks for sharing.
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 21 . 10/7/2013
yay a nice fluffy chapter, great chapter.