|Reviews for Harmonic Convergence|
| WiseOldSoul chapter 17 . 5/23
so thus far, i have enjoyed this story.
it is your original story and i cannot say anything against
however, just one thing i wished that was different in
the story is that...although we see all of the troubled past
that caused paul to become the way he is,
i wished that bella didn't give into him so easily.
so yes, she wanted some time to think, or some distance from
paul when she finds out about him and leah, but really, she doesn't
do any more than that continuing to give into him time and time again.
in reality, it would be sickening for me to hear if my wolf would be
trying to deny the wolf and continue to have sex with someone else.
that would be so heart breaking no matter the reason that i am not sure i
would be able to look at him within such a short period of time without picturing
him with her sexing it up...thus, it would take a long time for that trust to
yea yea, we know bella is kind hearted, innocent, forgiving, etc, but it
only makes her seem like a pushover, no matter how strong a pull of an imprint is...
in fact she should be madder than hell because of the imprinting for what paul did
and perhaps not even talk to him for a long time...until he grovels some more and
suffers some more...
just my 2cents...
other than that, good story...
| Cramos28 chapter 22 . 1/12
Awesome sauce! I loved this story it was remarkable! I never thought I would love Paul and Bella this much but I think I love it more than Edward and Bella and definitely more than Bella and jake
| 2meggles1 chapter 22 . 10/31/2014
Absolutely loved this story and all of your others. You guys are amazing writers! Please continue to write I love them all :)
| sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 22 . 7/25/2014
My eyes are still red from ths story. It was good, had a happy ending, but I just wish there was more time of them being happy after all that happened.
| MusicLovingQt08 chapter 22 . 3/8/2014
Omfg soooo good you gotta do some future takes or a sequel I'm dying to read more you guys are amazing authors
| WallWatcher33 chapter 3 . 3/3/2014
No thanks, I'd rather have a half-naked Jake!
| Inlovewithjazz chapter 22 . 2/8/2014
Wow! Thank you!
| Alaina08 chapter 22 . 1/3/2014
this is one of the best stories I've read.
| Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 22 . 12/11/2013
i loved it great happy for paul and bella
| DragonzWingz89 chapter 22 . 12/4/2013
O...M...G! Love, love, love this story! You girls do an amazing job! Im definatly goin to be lookin for more of yalls stories!
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 22 . 10/7/2013
That was just the perfect ending, this was a well written story, good plot, character progression, I liked how you kept Jasper as Pauls friend, great piece of work, and thanks for sharing.
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 21 . 10/7/2013
yay a nice fluffy chapter, great chapter.
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
OMG why would she choose Edwierd over Paul, not your Paul anyway Sabi'sSookie, glad they all worked together to get Bella back, great chapter.
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 19 . 10/7/2013
You are so very right it is a very sobering thought, that if you die, someone you love dies with you, gives a shudder. great chapter.
| jacobsgirl007 chapter 18 . 10/7/2013
That was hot, yeah Bella got some Paul loving, but now it's all to hell in a hand basket, great chapter.