Reviews for In the Stacks
my2galspal chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Ooooh, I liked it a lot. The only thing I wasn't fond of is the fact that it's a one-shot. I'd really like to know more like why did Jasper basically give Bella the answer as to what he is and whether or not he's cheating on Alice. I know their trivial questions in the grand scheme of things but they are what sticks in my mind.

Thanks so much for sharing your writing. I really enjoyed it.
TheTofurkey chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This short story was wonderfully hilarious! Bella's inner monologue was very amusing. As were her conversations with Angela. Looking forward to reading more by you!
Nauticalmass chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
You so have to continue this!
starchick7003 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Wow this story is EPIC I just so happen to come across it today and im SOOO glad I did! ya know u could turn this into a few chapter story and none of us would complain :) #justsaying! lol thanks for an epic read Ur an amazing author!
almondgirl3 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Gah! That was awesome. Angela was hilarious! "Is this consensual?"
xXxAlilordessxXx chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Love it XD
ReadingIsSexy15 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Yes you really want to know bella! Trust me! YOU WANT TO KNOW!
ehqueue chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Fantastic! Oh my gosh, Jasper, leave Alice and runaway with Bella! I love wondering whether she'd ever think of slo-mo-ing the videos to see him blur around (admittedly, I couldn't figure out how he 'disappeared' until I had my "duh" moment). And Angela! Quite the voyeur! I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this. Are you thinking of continuing this? I'd love to read more!
sherry williams chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
covenmama chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Awesome! Funny and sexy and left me wanting a continuation!
kage kitsune 14 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
That's Jasper right? And he's worried about Alice seeing? I love Angela's character in this. Are you going to add more chapters?
MoonPrincess623 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
YES YOU DO! Oh I can see this turning into epic!
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Whoa! this was so good!

(even the lemon. LOL!)

But besides that, loved this story! Bit of mystery, possible danger... who knows what he could have possibly done to her?

then the old adage, "Leave 'em wanting more..." and you did!

Good job!
SimplyJanice chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I really liked the story here. It had a nice plot to it. You could even continue this one if you'd like. I'd read it. I love Jasper. Don't tell her when he's comming back Alice might see. lol good line! Also good one with the "supernatural" and the myths of the cold ones...very good.

Undasque chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I loved the idea of this. Thank you.

Care to expand it?
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