Reviews for Make Believe
cjunited38 chapter 1 . 1/13
not a lot can be said lol just action lol
Myx Nyx chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Ah! So cute and 'hot' and fun and fun-ny! I totally loved it!
nirricles-happen chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Hahaa so cute! And they just kissed an knew it!

Buuuuut, what I do have to say is if Jane says 'let me and maura get it' that's correct phrasing!
CharlieTheCAG chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Giovanni is not wrong.
free28 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
motherfucker. holy hell that was great
Roman'sGayLover chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Leave it to Giovanni to say..."That's really hot." Something Giovanni would say.
solipsisticsyndrome chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Jane's middle name is Clementine, not Angela...
catherine8000 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Amazing! This story is super cute and totally made me laugh.
Jo chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Damn-this was so good.
QueenIsles chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
okay, that was just a kissed. but! damned, THAT WAS HOT!
davislp chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
That was hot.
Bambibelle84 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
BRILLIANT OMG you wrote these 4 characters just brilliantly. IF ONLY THIS WOULD HAVE HAPPEN
Healer chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
haha, nice!
lovely-J22 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
That was hysterical! Loved it!
cc1989 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Such a brilliant way of putting these two together. I loved that Angela pretty much knew about the two of them, the smoldering glances.. Awesome.
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