|Reviews for Bones in the Well|
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I've been waiting for years for someone to write this and do it justice, and you've done more than that. Your original characters are well-realized and I especially love Paula and her determination alongside her hero-worship. I like the way Brennan has her predictable and very *her* wild expectations of super-human performance...from herself and those around her. I love the tie in to Michael Stires' "We tell the truth, we do not flinch." Nice usage of that. Excellently walked line on the torture and threats and beatings...enough to be horrific, but not overkill so that it was excessive (or irrecoverable before she went home in a way that Angela not knowing would have been not believable). I like your subtle touch with Paula's response to their captivity, and I like how you have Brennan setting clear limits about what they have to do-reach the river-before they can rest. Excellent work throughout.
| penandra chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Wow! Really great story. Good detail and suspense and very "Brennan".
Thank you for sharing.
| Frankielovesjohnnie chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Great story. Loved it