|Reviews for Playing With Fire|
| Mantinas chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
| Itssupereffective chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
Alright you want me to leave a clear cut review, well here it is. There were a few grammar mistakes here and there. Also I think it would be OOC for Ash to betray Paul like that for Gary.
Other than that it was a good one shot and it's good to see Paul get his heartbroken every once and a while. I thought the way you portrayed the emotion was really good and the ending was very dark but now I want to see what happens next.
| Link's Little Brother chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Nice Story. Continue please!
| WhyWouldYouWriteThat chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
| Vulpixi Misa chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Ash, you bitch. I hope Paul hits him hard with that revenge. Bitch deserves it.
| QueenPalkia chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I like the plot, and how for once, Paul is the one with the heartbreak.
However, there is a way you can improve this fic. As I read it, to me it seemed like a letter. After all, Paul keeps adressing Ash as 'you'. Maybe you could edit the chapter and make it so that Paul is writing a letter to Ash? You don't need to do what I'm only suggesting, though, it is your fanfic and that is just my advice.
You have good spelling and grammar. You also described it well enough for me to pick up on the PalletShipping. That's a nice touch.
Good luck writing the next chapter and feel free to take your time. I'll be back with reviews!
ALL HAIL DA QUEEN!