|Reviews for While You Were Out|
| MienaiFille chapter 1 . 2/28
Oh my word. I couldn't stop laughing at Ritsu's distress over Usagi-san writing about him and Takano-san and Misaki's reaction "...so long as he works on that, he won't write Pure Love Romantica!" its hilarious!
| margecamins chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Poor Ritsu. LOLOLOL
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
#BURST OUT SO MUCH LOUD LAUGHS
OH MY GOD!
THIS FIC IS JUST TOO AWESOME! LOL
Before Poor Misaki... and now Poor Ritsu!
| loulou-chan1 chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Just to say I love your story but Misaki would never have been Egoist
| janeyuki chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Love it! Thank you! It was very funny!
| shaneEgirlo chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
Welcome to the 'Usami Akihiko wrote about my love life in a BL novel' club, Ritsu.
| Miss Ai Naz chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Seriously I can't stop laughing... This story as well the prequel are very interesting..
| PreciousAll chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
AAAAAAAA! SO CUTEEEEE SO HILARIOUS SO EPIIIIC!
so fav this!
the best part is when ritsu and takano's story is made by akihiko, is like 'WHAAAAAAAA-'
You had me screaming there.
again, so in character, for me at least; and I could imagine it happen in the manga and anime, damnit! you're awesome :'D
| SnowyIce chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
I love this story. It was hilarious and true to
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Loved every minute of it, glad that they got their own book in the end. I'd buy one.
| jenuuchi chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
When there was the short story, I was like "Takano and Ritsu?" And it was and I was like "OMG LAAAAWL
| AmberWarrior chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
OMG LOLOLOLOL RITSU!
| Likachu chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Awesome story that ended so hilarious, I laughed a lot at the end with the new book. Well done.
| Argon Jaden Siberite Bluridge chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
LMFAO. XD Damnit I was laughing so hard my cheeks hurt. Urk. Best laugh ever. Love it. XD
| Windying chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Is there a continuity of this?