|Reviews for Bad Day for Daddy|
| Lucifer Lucius G chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
Awww cute! Dango..dango dango dango...
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
I LOVED IT. This one was so cute! I must say, though- CLANNAD FTW.
| ChernobylKrigare chapter 2 . 8/10/2011
You need to format your story so it's not one long paragraph. It makes it hard to read.
Also, try to beef it up a bit. There are a lot of mundane details in this story without a lot of nice descriptions or style. I do want to know what made Berwald so pissed at Tino, but if you keep writing like this, I'm not intrigued enough to continue reading.
Take your time with your next chapters and publish something you can be really proud of. You'll get a lot of nicer reviews that way too.
| Vivecka chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
This is so sad, how could Berwald be so mean?