Reviews for Your Lips on Mine
UniverseAnxiety chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Awww! So sweet!
ShadedRogue chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
This was absolutely adorable, and beautiful. I think it's sweet that they became each other's first kiss. I thought the comparison to coca-cola was an interesting touch, and the analogy to the Russian dolls after the kiss was finished.

I thought this piece was extremely well written; your descriptive narrative is lovely and flows really nicely. All in all, it was a wonderful and lovely piece.
Empress Nightshade chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
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I thought it was well written. I didn't see any grammar errors. Keep up the good work.
Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I saw that meme too, but I wrote about their last meeting instead. Witch Baby and Angel Juan never seemed as "right" to me as the other couples, mostly because he's always walking out on her, but your take on them is really sweet. I like his observations about her trying to prove everyone wrong; that sounds very like Witch Baby. And of course you can't have a Weetzie-Style First Kiss without yummy food comparisons ... Coca Cola indeed.