|Reviews for Drag Her From Heaven, Drag Him From Hell|
| deanwteam4ever chapter 8 . 11/19/2012
I love it!
| JD Lady chapter 18 . 9/17/2012
Wow, I love it! Heading over to the sequel now...!
| JD Lady chapter 7 . 9/16/2012
I'm reading this at your suggestion, and I love the narrative voice. It's sooooo Chuck! (later season spoiler, in case you're not already there, anyone who's reading, sorry!)
But this is evil, just evil, they're together but it's Dean's last day? Oooh, you are mean.
I suppose I'll have to keep reading to find out what Cas did wrong... ;)
| Lollypop Disease chapter 18 . 1/30/2012
I'll admit that I don't read a lot of fan fiction (I've been writing it since before fanfiction probably had a name though) but for some reason I just had this desire to search for some Dean and Jo fanfic last night. I'm really glad that I stumbled on your story. I enjoyed every word of it! Can't wait to read your follow up!
| Heatherlina chapter 18 . 1/7/2012
I was shocked to see my name mentioned in your thank you's. I could never repay you for the guidance you've shown me. I saw a friend in need and it was the least I can do. But I'll leave the rest for a private setting.
Oh and by the way...you're quite the evil temptress with that ending. I love it. Keep me on my toes. Is it early 2012 yet?
| Heatherlina chapter 17 . 1/7/2012
This chapter was so eye opening and revealed a bigger picture. To come all this way and receive answers was worth the wait.
"There are still monsters that will need to be fought. It won't always be easy. But life is what you make of it," he says, brilliant white light spreading behind him. "Cherish what you've been given and be the man we both know you are."
I loved this part :)
| Heatherlina chapter 16 . 12/30/2011
Ahhhh Bobby's house. The alternate Ellen-ized version with home cooked meals and warm painted walls. The homey feeling that makes me smile. You made me want to be at that dinner table too. Thank you for taking me there :)
| BlackIceWitch chapter 17 . 12/30/2011
Excellent ending, satisfying, message intact, strongly written and including one of my favourite characters, which is just a bonus ;)
About the only thing I would suggest, overall and bear in mind this is primarily about my preferences, not about your writing skill, is to review the work and add slightly more description to set the scenes a little more firmly in the reader's mind, where it doesn't interrupt the flow of the action?
Out of curiosity, how many drafts did this story go through? The beginning chapters feel less accomplished than the later ones, as the story began to take on its own life and the characters were snugged securely into themselves? Do you feel that? I may, as is my wont, be barking up the wrong tree here, but with nothing to add to the last ... five or six? chapters at all, it just feels that way to me.
As mentioned before, the story is compelling, and I can see why it's your favourite, mine too :) Well done and keep writing!
| BlackIceWitch chapter 16 . 12/30/2011
A very nice job of catching Dean up on all the changes from his time adventure. All believable, all natural.
The one very minor OOC thing I've noticed is the y'all variously from Sam, Dean and Jo. In my mind, none of them affect that drawl, only Bobby and Ellen. It knocked me out of the story for a second - nothing important but just thought I'd let you know.
| BlackIceWitch chapter 14 . 12/30/2011
Chapter Thirteen (and 12 by the way):
Again very strong, very clear, very focussed. No extraneous dialogue, the action moves forward logically and believably. Nice :)
| BlackIceWitch chapter 12 . 12/30/2011
This entire chapter is superb writing. The "hells" that are created by the soul trapped there are just perfect and have great imagination.
Is it annoying getting a review per chapter?
| BlackIceWitch chapter 11 . 12/30/2011
Getting fairly anal here, but reviewing is reviewing, as they say in the classics:
"A firearm would likely be of little use where she was going."
Past tense. A firearm will likely be of little use where she is going. She hasn't gone yet, and the previous sentences are present tense?
"Sam's voice reciting the latin chant become distorted"
Latin should be a capital, referring to the language.
"limbs splay so wide apart that his joints nearly separate"
| BlackIceWitch chapter 9 . 12/29/2011
Chapter 8: Very tight, focussed and rivetting. Only one thing I could find:
"Look out for Sammy," he pleads. "He's gonna need you every much as you'll need him. I don't want..."
Should there be a "bit as" between every and much?
| BlackIceWitch chapter 7 . 12/29/2011
Chapter 6 reads very well indeed. Enough clues but nothing stated directly. Lovely!
| BlackIceWitch chapter 6 . 12/29/2011
"I try to stand up and stumble. There is a throbbing. A noise not unlike how I imagine my true voice would sound to a human echoes inside my vessel's skull. His eyes shut, a blinding light overtaking us as the noise continues. It grows sharp until it becomes painful."
In this para, you have used "I" and "His" ... do both refer to Castiel? Is there a reason for moving to second person from first? Not sure if this is an error or deliberate?