|Reviews for Not Intentional|
| Heart Of A Gypsy chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
what does the last par mean?
| MOVEDTOANOTHER chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
This was the cutest Fanfic of these two yet. The cheering fans were very supportive and it made it worthwhile to read. I never tire of reading about Uke!Zexion Stories.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
Awwww so nice!
| Princess Moon Rose chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
No more...? *confused face* why not?
| roxasXme chapter 2 . 6/17/2012
i loved it so much!When Demyx asked Zexion to marry him i was !please make more like this one!
| Robin93K chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
first expression: wow
second expression: what the fuck
final expression: that is really a fucking describing story.
But even as 100% straight I liked the story! And I never thought that something like this I could like...
Also that in the start of the Story I envy Zexion and wished that there would be some girls on earth like Demyx xD But I would envy the gays... If only the mans so... -.-
Oh and Im amazed... how do you know such a lot about the male sex? Especially such "intim" facts?
Oh and I think THIS is the next level of porn xD
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
this shouldn't be classified as h/c though. you may get more hits if you remove that tag.
great job! thanks for sharing!
| denise134 chapter 2 . 9/27/2011
Aww, Yum, Dawwwwww, YAAAYYYY! That was the order of my reactions.
| IRlyLoveFanFiction chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
well that was... not a lemon
THT WAS A LEMON SOAKED IN LEMON JUICE MADE FROM LEMON CONCENTRATE MADE FROM FRESH LEMONS MIXXED WITH SOUR SUGAR MIXED WITH LIMES AND CHERRIES...
| PumpkinLenses chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
its so fluffy. I look like an idiot know because my eyes are watering and i have the biggest smile :DD
| JP JAY JAY chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
WOW, this is so, beautiful!
it makes me cry *sniff* now don't cry JP, just stay strong no matter what!
my inner voice: but this is so beautiful!
me: I know *starts crying*
me and my inner voice: thank you, JJKMagic, for making this beautiful story!
| Nessie-san chapter 4 . 8/17/2011
THIS WAS SO CUTE! Thank you so much for writing it / By the way, there were no mistakes in this chapter. There was ONE in the author note, but apart from that, NOTHING! I was so happy! Also, the end...it was just too cute! And sweet, and...well, fluffy XD Awesome job on the epilogue, and thank you for writing it for me XD
| SexyZexiReturnsWithBananas chapter 4 . 8/15/2011
XD lmao, I have no life...
AWWWWWW So cute! :D Few mistakes, but everything can't be perfect right XD! Awww, I kept giggling while reading this. Great job, as always. Awwwww, hahaha, this is so cute... Reminds me of recent memories, happy ones! :) Yay!
I wuv this story :D! If I had an account, I would fav. you and your stories.
Okay, well, -end of review- :D lol
| SexyZexiReturnsWithBananas chapter 3 . 8/14/2011
Awwwwwww So cute
w I look forward to reading more of your stories, though I have read a few.
Anyways, very few mistakes, not noticable or anything. :D So fluffeh! I love it. You write very good Zemyx and lemons/fluff. w Nice
Epicly awesome story Bai
| Nessie-san chapter 3 . 8/14/2011
Very good - The ending was very sweet, and the rest was...XD You had some mistakes, but not too many (one of them was almost certainly a typo), and the end of the story was very good. Most people probably don't have any questions as to what happens next (they start going out, maybe get married (depends on where you decide they live), maybe adopt a couple of kids), but I'd kind of like an epilogue. It'd be interesting to read exactly what you think happens next - Awesome job, and I can't wait for what comes next -