Reviews for Wing Commander: Clean Sweep
JasonNoir chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
Chapter two felt a bit shorter, but it's nice to read about the old school figthers and cap ships. I wasn't a fan of the Confed pilots' tactics, since taking out the Dralthis together seems safer and more efficient. I'm also hoping that the level of danger increases in future chapters, as the cats seem to be getting whooped with ease at the moment. Looking forward to more of the story.
JasonNoir chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Just finished reading the first chapter. While there are grammar issues, I enjoyed the chapter overall. There were a number of clever moments, and I'm glad that you emphasized Mailman's inexperience as a pilot. I think it's really a shame that there aren't more reviews for your story, and if you happen to read this, I suggest posting your story on in the forums. I'll continue reading, and give you some more feedback in the future.