|Reviews for Rebuild|
| Lady Morrgana chapter 24 . 2/20
I loved you'd version of Draco...great story
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/10/2013
i didnt like dracos behaviour in this chapter, he didnt seem like a changed person...still wanted to use a spell on muggles and was rude.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
and Draco's apology about Malfoy manor was poor...so I think she is silly for kissing him and being so nice to him.
| JaneA0202 chapter 24 . 4/10/2013
so..even though I thought that it was a bit rushed how they got together, it was a lovely story.
| JaneA0202 chapter 5 . 4/9/2013
I still think that Hermione is being very nice to him...and that kiss in the end...that was a way too soon. Its just 5th chapter after all. But maybe I think so because I like slow build up and this is basicaly no build up.
| JaneA0202 chapter 3 . 4/9/2013
I'm not sure why, but I feel that its too soon for them to have such a honest conversation...it seems really strange, especially when he told her she is beautiful. Does he have some hidden feelings for her?
| LimitedWeirdo chapter 23 . 12/15/2012
Absolutely beautiful. Very well written with only a few minor typos here and there. All in all it was a great love story and I couldn't stop reading it once I started! You are a very gifted writer! I can't wait to read more of your stories! (:
| goddammitijustwantausername chapter 24 . 12/12/2012
im so sad its over! it was brilliant!
| drgon blue chapter 24 . 10/27/2012
I LOVED your story! This was defently one of the best! ... I am sorry but I just HAVE to comment on chapter 24. That was funny as hell! I'm sorry I know it is really bad to be criticised and it makes it worse if it is a idiot that thinks they know everything. This is the first story a read that was writen by you and you just got another follower! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I sure as hell couldn't do it. Well anyway have a gr8 day and yeah! Bye!
| Guisoris chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
| Anonymous chapter 20 . 7/17/2012
Love the story, just have one correction:
"Then I'll see you on Easter Sunday" Blaise said, theatrically bowing and turning on the spot.
"You didn't have to do that sweetheart" BLAISE told her as he took hold of her hand.
"Blaise has been very nice to me since we started dating, more accepting that any of your other friends and I it will be nice if you can spend some more time with him" Hermione replied nonchalantly.
The Blaise in capitals should be Draco speaking, since blaise already apparated away. Thanx
| RomanticLover1 chapter 24 . 7/10/2012
God I just read 'Seriously's review and I can understand why you sound pissed off. Although it's best to keep in mind that some people don't have an account, and they don't need one.
| HP0247 chapter 6 . 7/4/2012
Sorry - you've lost me and I'm droping out of this story. Not at all believable, even for fanfiction.
| HP0247 chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
Uh - not sure about Draco being some much out of character seems a bit extreme and totally unbelievable to me. Overall, I however like the story so far.
| tinksauble chapter 23 . 6/21/2012
Greatly enjoyed your story! Thanks!