Reviews for Future Starts Slow
danae.14 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Wonderful au, very creative. I'd love to see more chapters.
Redluna chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
I had to do a double take at the summary when I read it the first time, but you handled the idea so well! Not to mention I love dystopian ideas so you pretty much had me at that.
AnimeSiren chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
This was really fantastic, thanks for writing!
Evie Specter chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
(suddenly wants to write nothing but dystopian romances involving emo boys in hoodies)

This story snuck up on me. You have a very casual voice as a writer, so at first I thought it might be one of those stories where an amateur just splatters words like is their own personal diary.

Instead with your casual phrasing and rambling sentences you pulled me into something surprisingly captivating. And despite being a dystopia, it totally lived up to the genre marking "humor" - not an easy feat.

(the best twist was when Arthur was actually a government agent)