Reviews for Emotionless Love
Rikasa chapter 1 . 7/19
Yay, I'm so glad Len's not a playboy or anything! Also that Miku's nice! :)
~Rikasa
Guest chapter 5 . 5/4
tony is the name of my dad...
Christie Wind chapter 1 . 2/27
Nice story!
Guest chapter 15 . 1/28
I love your story, and here is MY very tiny one-shot!

Somewhere in America...
(Remember, folks that is in America)

Story-"School, Monday, books, and learning, four of my least favorite words"
Me-what?! That's that's five words!
*recounts*
School Monday books learning
Me-...Yeeeeeaaaaahhhhh, I know how to count. :P
*continues to read, and re-reads the last scentence*
Story-"School, Monday, books, and learning, four of my least favorite words"
Me-...HA HA HA SUCKERS! I CAN COUNT LOOK!
School Monday books AND learning
Me- I WAS COUNTING THE WORD 'AND'! TAKE THAT!

Somewhere in China...
(Now remember, I'm in America, this person is in China)

Some Chinese Chef Person- Did you here that?
*Everyone in the resterant nods in agreement*
Some Chinese Chef Person-Good, I thought it was just me...

Back in America...
Me- Huh...HEY MOM, I THINK SOME CHINESE CHEF PERSON AND THE RESTERANT WAS TALKING ABOUT ME IN CHINA!
Mom-And what makes you think that dearie?
Me-*shrugs* Meh, just a hunch.
Reality-That's not possible.
Me- YOU are not possible.
Reality- That's a lie.
Me- Your a lie.
Reality-...

Hehe.. Sorry I had to. Love your story SO MUCH! If you understood the reference of "just a hunch" and that ending, Virtual Cookies! (With a capital V and C)

-Miku4evah
P.S.
Constructive Criticism-The only thing I would change is that I think Len opened up a little too quickly. I think that Rin would have more of a struggle to get him to open up, but that is just my opinion. I love this story anyway though.
Levi John chapter 16 . 4/3/2014
aww... thats adorable... you fanfic was awesome 0u0
mklqueen12 chapter 16 . 1/22/2014
OMG your such a good writer I loved this story. Now time to go read your other stories 3 mklqueen12
Wolfinmist chapter 16 . 11/28/2013
KYYAAAAAAAAAAAA! This story is so cute and sweet!
The defender of pokespe chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
... Why do I feel sorry for Tei instead of Rin...? -.- well I guess it's a trend here to like Yanderes and Tsunderes... :3
The defender of pokespe chapter 6 . 11/26/2013
I actually really like Tei, it's sad how she's always the villain...
Guest chapter 16 . 10/21/2013
Actually,i love the ending! I thought it was really cute!
Guest 93 chapter 14 . 10/5/2013
" HOLY AUGHIRJHEHFDNFNUDNSI THAT WAS NOT MEANT TO BE SAID!"-Len
BEST. QUOTE. EVER! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
omg chapter 16 . 7/25/2013
OMG...OMG...O...M...G KYAAAAA! THE ENDING IS SOOOOOOO CUTE I COULD JUST READ ABOUT THERE NEW DAILY LIFES ALL DAY x3 I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND UPDATE THE OTHERS SOON
Honeycloud of RiverClan chapter 3 . 7/12/2013
I guess you're tired of reading my reviews.

Why is it so hard for people to tell the difference between your and you're? -_-"

I'm sorry if I sound like a bitch... TT TT
Honeycloud of RiverClan chapter 2 . 7/12/2013
You need to look over this chapter again.

Please go over this. It's an okay story, but the grammar. Please.

I'm not trying to flame you or anything, just... you need to fix all the dialogue.

GAH I'm rambling again sorry.
Honeycloud of RiverClan chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I read on your profile that you were going to rewrite some stuff, and I can agree that this chapter needs it. The dialogue, for example, was slightly painful to read. And I think there're a few spelling mistakes.

So that's what I gleaned from my second time reading this. Not that it's not a good story, just the writing needs some work.
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