Reviews for Thut up
Dayan chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
this was so cute and I loved it :)
httpkirby chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Now Ed mu2t alway2 wriite liike thii2. XD
batsbloodsoup chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
I was about to die when Roy said, "Thut up, Fullmetal." That was funny. :D
andysanime chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
...Oh goodness... poor Ed XD
Victorious-Mind chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Ahhhhahaha it was hilarious. LOVELY!
extraordinary geek chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Oh, I love this story, it's completely adorable and funny! :)
bezawesome chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
hahaha! I loved it! Brilliant! Edd would do that just to spite him and I love the last line. keep up the good work!
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Funny! Love it! It's so cute!
Cartoon Cow chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Thats utterly hilarious! You know I just got the Brotherhood OVA collection and it one part theres a Roy rap so when you said 'the Mustang' I immediatly thought about it.
the-caffeine-junkiie-reviewer chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Aww. Cute story and well written _ I could see this scene happening in the anime if Ed ever got his tongue pierced!
werdf chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Hahaha very funny and creative!

But one problem. In this line: "May. I. Be. Excused. Right. Now. Colonel. Jerk face" There is an 's' sound in 'excused' and 'face' Just a little problem i noticed there. 'sides that, it's hilarious! :D
Karin Matthews chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
haha very amusing. saving this to favourites so i can read it when i need cheering up lol
silvers-edge chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Hahahahaha rofl. That was awesome. My sides hurt from laughing. Keep up the good work!
Moontoy chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Lol funny story :3

but I heard tounge peircings hurt.. Oh well
TickyTickyTa chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Wow. This had me giggleing all the way through.

I love Roy being so cocky. XD
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