Reviews for Secret Love
huco mundo chapter 1 . 5/17
Love the story great concept and love the pairing I would love to read the story if some one wrote it fom the time they meet to end of war I wold like to do itbut quite frankly im shit an making fanfic s never good at writing diologue to fit a character
bao-earthdragon chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
The story is nice but you have to edit it completely. There are way to many mistakes in it. Like this it is very difficult to read.
I'm not only talking about spelling mistakes or grammatic issues. At parts entire sentences are wrong in their structure and words are wrongly used. It's a bit confusing and while I get what you want to say it's only because I understand english on a high level.
It is not fair for those who are not so good in this language.
But otherwise it is a cool plot
Moondog10 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
This story was AWESOME. Loved it :)
But I would also LOOOVE a sequel where everyone would get their opinions/thoughts on Tenten and Naruto in a relationship.
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Damn does this have a sequel?
kevinhongpro chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
STOP SAYING KAMI. Thank you. Other than that, it was great.
KingdomAxel chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
This is amazing.i totally ship them now. It'll be awesome if this fanfics becomes a sequel after the akatsuki. I would love to read it
Do The Roar2012 chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Hahahaha this was brilliant, I loved the idea of them two being secret friends since the beginning too
SkyRage chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Make a sequel! (If you haven't already)
Lord Niralath Lothiel chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
This story, is really interesting ) Although, it be interesting to see sequel to this, where you could make it that they had defeated all the Akatuski, and afterwards Sakura confess her love to nature (Sasuke could be killed or what not) and he only denies, to grab Tenten who is near to kiss her, and tell everyone, that he was already engaged with Tenten and what not. Seeing as you made this story so nicely, I would love to see a sequel to this )
Uzumaki-sama011 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
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draco122 chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
loved this
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Syynex chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
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Hakkyou30 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
This story was most certainly amusing!
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Loved the entirety:)
beastmode953 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Great story. Loved the sneezing parts and you got real sexual in the end wtf lol I'm not really into naruto shippings but this honestly caught my eye. It almost parallels ny favorite Pokemon pairing ash and may. Great job on this fic. Hope to see more from you
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