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BrownieJune chapter 2 . 10/31/2017
Just perfect !
FFAddict chapter 1 . 1/12/2017
Definitely interesting, I like that you don't paint imprinting as a magical way fot a happily ever after although the plot was a bit controversial. *Spoiler alert* Paul wanted her to make her own decision but she didn't have all the knowledge to really make it. She thought that Paul couldn't be more than a temporary f* buddy since he could imprint at any time and honestly it would've been somewhat stupid to set herself into another disappointment after Edward. Sure, people don't have guarantees in relationships but after all the pain she's been through I doubt she would be willing to take the risk. She didn't even know that he loved her till she read the letter and honestly the Cullens could just as well decide to not give it to her. It was a leap of faith for Paul to trust the Cullens like that. In my opinion the chances for them to have their HEA when Paul acted like that were nearly non existent. I agree that imprinted or not they should be able to make their own choices and to build the relationship instead of jumping into it but withholding vital information doesn't improve chances for the right choices to be made.
Also I think I'll pass on Paul's point of view. He set himself for a lot of pain in your story and I'm not into angst.
autumnsimril chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
I really love this.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2016
Chapter 3
20.BOOK.ADDICT.18 chapter 2 . 5/20/2016
loved his view more
orchidluv chapter 2 . 3/21/2016
this was fantastic!
TinaF chapter 2 . 2/18/2016
Fantastic!
obsessedwecjwbs chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
This was a great story and I really enjoyed reading it from both perspectives.
Jessesarahjane chapter 2 . 1/5/2016
A lovely story.
GirlsDontCry chapter 2 . 12/2/2015
I loved it and it was a great read.
Tiffany hawkins chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
Please add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with Bella and paul
1tinac chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
Amazing story.
rochelleross56 chapter 2 . 8/5/2015
Yay bella choose Paul ...this a great chapter great story great job I hate to see it end...
rochelleross56 chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
Wow what a confession it must have cost paul a lot of pain in order for bella to make her own choice that is so sweet... Great first chapter...
Anon chapter 2 . 6/19/2015
Literally the best imprinting story. Ever. Super deep, kinda angsty, I'm a little more on the fluffy side cause angst makes me sad but still, quality stuff.
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