Reviews for The Struggle to Survive
Purest of the Hearts chapter 23 . 9/1
They are just not having a good day are they? Everything decided today was the day to screw them over.
Unknown chapter 1 . 3/5
I swear if this red pikmin is Steve I'm going to scream
Purest of the Hearts chapter 20 . 9/26/2016
Hmm. I wonder why Foxtail wants to see Red (I'm gonna lose it if he decides to name himself Steve the Trooper) if they survive the battle against the other Pikmin. Maybe he knows something
Please starship chapter 19 . 8/9/2016
I can not wait for the next one. Glad to see you are still writing
Purest of the Hearts chapter 19 . 8/9/2016
UUUUUPPPPDAAAAATEEEEEE :D You guys act more hostile than cats fighting over territory.
Purest of the Hearts chapter 18 . 3/24/2016
Sometimes you gotta take risks. That is true. But unfortunately, you just put yourself in the middle of a war...
Kiwi5 chapter 4 . 2/27/2016
Wow.I can't believeit.
Rocket Rover chapter 18 . 1/25/2016
Please write More this story is really good
V rex chapter 18 . 1/18/2016
Ewww, you got V Rex to Beta Read? Despise that guy :/
finatyc chapter 17 . 12/5/2015
you should introduce bulbmin, mushroom pikmin, and maybe pikpik carrot pikmin. I'd imagine they'd all burst out into a huge 'WELCOME TO THE UNDERGROUND!' once they meet the main cast.
Jedi Alex Colbent chapter 9 . 10/11/2015
As interesting as this story is, I can't help but feel like it would be simpler for character development if all the Pikmin each had their own name. If they can build communities that work together like family, what's stopping them from completing their identities and giving themselves names like "Berry Catcher" or "Demon Fighter?"
Kage23 chapter 16 . 9/4/2015
Wow! I just have to say, this is a really good story so far! I couldn't tear my eyes away from it. I love all the dark secrets that are being revealed: it makes you think about who the real enemy is here. I'm disappointed that we didn't get to find out why they're fighting... yet. I hope you can explain that soon. Also, I think that the Trapmin are very interesting! I hope they will return in future chapters. Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to more :D
YDTHSFGJG chapter 16 . 8/26/2015
I hope Bulbmin appear at some point in the story, it would be a nice inclusion. ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Love this story :D can't wait for it to be updated!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Best fan fiction I've read on fan :D PLEASE continue this story
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